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Title: Please help me to polish the Engrish in this portal :D
Post by: rpietila on March 14, 2013, 10:30:13 PM
https://www.silverbank.net/index.php/en (https://www.silverbank.net/index.php/en)

We are in the process of updating the website of this Silver-and-Bitcoins-warehousing-service. Please help me by having a look at the front page, correct spelling errors and give any general comments. All help is appreciated! Thank you :) 


Title: Re: Please help me to polish the Engrish in this portal :D
Post by: rpietila on March 14, 2013, 11:09:37 PM
Just the front page, the other contents is under construction.


Title: Re: Please help me to polish the Engrish in this portal :D
Post by: Tirapon on March 14, 2013, 11:27:48 PM
Seems to be missing 'Bitcoin accepted here'  ;)


Title: Re: Please help me to polish the Engrish in this portal :D
Post by: Tirapon on March 14, 2013, 11:29:10 PM
'Start saving for retairement' - retirement


Title: Re: Please help me to polish the Engrish in this portal :D
Post by: Tirapon on March 14, 2013, 11:36:37 PM
'Silvervault Deep Storage: Are you a long-term investor? We have good news for you. The new Silvervault Deep Storage sets the standard for a low-fee long-term silver storage'

Can I suggest:

Silvervault Deep Storage: Are you a long-term investor? We have good news for you. Silvervault Deep Storage sets the standard for low-fee, long-term storage of silver


Title: Re: Please help me to polish the Engrish in this portal :D
Post by: rpietila on March 15, 2013, 12:04:49 AM
Thank you! The "Bitcoin accepted" section is under:

https://www.silverbank.net/index.php/en/meista

 ;D


Title: Re: Please help me to polish the Engrish in this portal :D
Post by: Tirapon on March 15, 2013, 12:06:11 AM
Actual physical silver is scarce - only a few grams per person exist in the world. Most "silver" investment opportunities offer a way to speculate on the price of silver, but hold little or no actual physical silver. Silvervault stores the silver balance of each customer in our own full-security bank vault, in the form of international standard coins. You may take delivery of your silver any time. Since 2010, we have provided our services to 800 private and corporate clients, and the vault currently contains about 3 500 kilograms of silver belonging to our customers.


Title: Re: Please help me to polish the Engrish in this portal :D
Post by: Tirapon on March 15, 2013, 12:17:43 AM
Silverwallet Current Account: Our most popular account is for customers wishing to retain the greatest flexibility in the management of their silver balances. Buy and sell at the lowest fees. Want to switch between silver and Bitcoin without cashing out? Should be possible before summer!


Title: Re: Please help me to polish the Engrish in this portal :D
Post by: Tirapon on March 15, 2013, 12:18:59 AM
Silvervault Deep Storage: Are you a long-term investor? We have good news for you. The new Silvervault Deep Storage sets the standard for low-fee long-term silver storage. Our per annum physical storage goes for as low as 0.24%. Buy and (almost) forget.


Title: Re: Please help me to polish the Engrish in this portal :D
Post by: rpietila on March 15, 2013, 12:27:18 AM
Thank you. Almost all of these changed! (The one I can't find in the menu..)


Title: Re: Please help me to polish the Engrish in this portal :D
Post by: Tirapon on March 15, 2013, 12:34:39 AM
No problem, glad to help. I imagine there will be a good number of people who will appreciate a service like this.


Title: Re: Please help me to polish the Engrish in this portal :D
Post by: Tirapon on March 15, 2013, 12:37:50 AM
Silvervault is a highly liquid way to invest in physical silver. As a storage provider, we offer the following services:
* Buy silver anytime, anywhere. Payment through a SEPA bank wire transfer. Sell with a mouse click, we will pay you the same day.
* Our fees are the lowest among physical silver dealers and depositories.


Title: Re: Please help me to polish the Engrish in this portal :D
Post by: Raoul Duke on March 15, 2013, 12:56:45 AM
The "retairement" typo that should be spelt "retirement" is located under the video on the sidebar.


Title: Re: Please help me to polish the Engrish in this portal :D
Post by: rpietila on March 15, 2013, 12:59:17 AM
Phew, I go to sleep it is late. It is a little bit under construction... :P