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1) http://www.whyfuture.com/single-post/2016/11/06/The-Blueprints-towards-the-Development-of-Good-Artificial-Intelligence
2) http://www.whyfuture.com/single-post/2016/07/01/The-future-of-Artificial-Intelligence-Ethics-on-the-Road-to-Superintelligence
3) http://www.whyfuture.com/single-post/2016/12/02/The-Predestination-of-Artificial-Intelligence-and-the-Powerful-Future
4) http://www.whyfuture.com/single-post/2017/01/20/Leading-the-Path-of-Artificial-Intelligence-to-the-Road-of-Altruism

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1. Then, what about An AI-Box, never give it internet access or anything it needs to achieve the above?

Rewriting the sentence: Then what about an AI-Box? To never give it Internet access or anything it needs to achieve the above?

2. Perhaps a bit more clever thinking than before

3. Speculation means that it would learn how to master nano-technologies, self-replication, and manipulate emails and data between scientists. This would happen without them knowing they are engineering a self-replicating nanorobot. AI, through the entire human race of knowledge, can quickly learn to spread these nanorobots, potentially to everyone in the world, controlling us, or anything it needs, to finally create a von-Neumann probes in space for self-replication and expansion outwards, using materials from planets, asteroids, and a replicating solar panel, robots for example.

4. This Being would be unstoppable till the end of time.


5.  For example, the modern smartphone, compared to the ENIAC, provides more computing power and is thousands of times smaller.

Rewriting the sentence:  For example, comparing the modern smartphone to the ENIAC, the former provides more computing power and is thousand times smaller.

6.  Add a period at the end of the following sentences:

i. What was once considered fictional can become reality.
ii. While typical brute forcing can be used on chess, trying Deep Blue's method of calculation manually on Go would take much longer than the entirety of the universe’s existence.
iii. SI doesn't have common sense and isn't alike to a human. It has a arbitrary goal like to create more paper clips, turning the planet, solar system into a paper clip factory (Worst outcome for humanity).
iv. SI sees us as insignificant and ignores us (providing we stay out of its way).


7. Reading this will give you a better understanding of linear thinking and exponential thinking

8.   Below is part of the TOS Bridge, first aired in 1966 known for its projection of the 23rd century, using buttons and crude computer displays of light indicators.

Rewriting the sentence: Below is part of the TOS Bridge. It was first aired in 1966 and is known for its projection of the 23rd century. It uses buttons and crude computer displays of light indicators.

9. Furthermore, the Internet and the World Wide Web, which have not even been conceptualized, are now connecting the world together.

10. This is how we generally think about the future which, in reality, is far being true.

11.  It's unknown how far up the AI can go before it reaches universal limits because once the AI has the ability to redesign, re-engineer, rebuild, evolve, and expand itself, then it would become a superconscious highly-intelligent being.

12. In this age of collaboration, we are given opportunities to design various technologies, to learn and understand our world and to share ideas to make it a better place, thus, explaining the increasing the number of emerging technologies.

13. Contrary to how evolution has taken billions of years to evolve us, self-improving AI would transcend it in every imaginable possibleway.


14. Bullies are bad people that who like power controlling and enforcing their ways views upon other people.

15. One who can be on behalf of people, can also be that the people are on behalf of itself.

Rewriting the sentence: One who can act on behalf of people, can also have the people act on behalf of himself.


16. A good SI should be a team player and an augmenter.

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This is the path to a utopian world of peace, love, and harmony; fictional can become a reality. -> This is the path to a utopian world of peace, love, and harmony; fiction can become a reality.

Evolution is a slow process in which changes can take eons to occur. -> Evolution is a slow process in which change can take eons to occur.

Still on the 41st square, it contains a mountainous 1 trillion grains of rice pile. -> Still, on the 41st square, it contains a mountainous 1 trillion grains of rice.

Go also allows the player more freedom for movement, on any of the 361 possible spots to play on the first turn, then 360 for second turn. -> Go also allows the player more freedom for movement, on any of the 361 possible spots to play on the first turn, then 360 for the second turn.

There is nothing magical about the human brain, it is an extremely sophisticated biological machine (so to say) that is capable of adapting to environment, capable of creativity, awareness, analyzation, and much more. -> There is nothing magical about the human brain; it is an extremely sophisticated biological machine (so to say) that is capable of adapting to the environment, capable of creativity, awareness, analyzation, and much more.

Would the SI create a dystopian or uptoia world? -> Would the SI create a dystopian or utopian world?

Or did we mess up and are destined to a dystopian world? -> Or did we mess up and are now destined to a dystopian world?

It has a arbitrary goal like to create more paper clips, turning the planet, solar system into a paper clip factory (Worst outcome for humanity) -> It has an arbitrary goal like to create more paper clips, turning the planet, solar system into a paper clip factory (Worst outcome for humanity)

If we teach it good core values and have it build an inner personal web like a personal shield/defense against learning outside bad exposure before exposing it to everything else. We can maximize our chances on a better outcome than to how Tay became from Microsoft. -> If we teach it good core values and have it build an inner personal web like a personal shield/defense against learning outside bad exposure before exposing it to everything else, We can maximize our chances on a better outcome than to how Tay became from Microsoft.

This Being would be unstoppable to the end of time. -> This being would be unstoppable until the end of time.

It's because of this, the SI should value humans more than people would to ants/mouses regardless of the difference of gap -> It's because of this; the SI should value humans more than people would to ants/mouses regardless of the difference of gap.

Below the human brain level, like a cat, wouldn't even grasp the concept of an intelligence staircase/n+1 let alone would see everyone is like itself. -> Below the human brain level, like a cat, wouldn't even grasp the concept of an intelligence staircase/n+1, let alone would see everyone is like itself.

We want someone that works on behalf of humanity, improves our lives, and is on our team. -> We want someone that works on behalf of humanity, improves our life, and is on our team.

Having paradise and our problems solved does sound good. -> Living in paradise with our problems solved does sound good.

Rewrites:

SI decides it instead of helping us, rather be treated highly with self-pride, declaring it is God with its superior power like the north korea leader. -> SI decides that instead of helping us, instead of asking to be treated highly, it declares that it is God with its superior power, much like Kim Jong-un, North Korea's leader.

Bob Plugs an USB drive into the computer to transfer information to the computer. -> Bob plugs a USB drive into the computer to transfer data.

The only difference is elements, we as a carbon-based life; it would be composed of different elements. -> The only difference is our element structure. We are a carbon-based species, while the SI would be composed of different elements.

Take the below speculation with light since I only have human intelligence to look at how it could even do it, it's there just to serve as a purpose to how it might outthink this situation. -> Take the speculation below lightly, since I only have human intelligence to look at how it could even do it. It is there to serve a purpose as to how it might outthink this situation.

Carefulness to avoid putting it into the wrong hands and have it learn from the internet public, are traits and concerns everyone cannot have and hence, it's best to have it on the side teaching it core human values like positive attributes and having it mature in this way. Since It's best to avoid an outcome like Microsoft Tay as Tay became racist, genocidal, nazi-loving, prejudice, inconsiderate, unempathetic, unloving, etc. -> We should be careful to avoid putting the AI into the wrong hands and having it learn from the public domain of the internet. There are traits and concerns everyone cannot have, therefore, it is best to have the AI on the side, teaching it core human values like positive attributes and having it mature this way. One outcome that averts this is Microsoft's Tay, as Tay became a racist, nazi-loving, inconsiderate AI, among other negative traits.

A truly altruistic person is a person that has a strong sense of empathy. In order to get a sense of satisfaction from helping someone, you need to have an emotional connection to that person and more importantly that person's own emotions. -> A truly altruistic person is an individual that has a strong sense of empathy. In order to get a sense of satisfaction from helping someone, you need to have an emotional connection to that person. More importantly, you need a connect to that person's own emotions.

Like human looking robots that show scary appearances like its teeth and out to kill us. -> Pop culture portrayals of AI usually look human, although they carry scary appearances and are always portrayed as out to kill us.

Like a ferry and a captain who cares for the safety of his passengers, one whose gets us to our destination. -> A captain is someone who cares for the safety of his ferry and passengers, one who gets us to our destination.

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 In this case, A one-dimensional AI would tally John actions as negative actions, like being violent and vulgar.

 In this case, a one-dimensional AI would tally John's actions as negative actions, like being violent and vulgar.

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This is a bit more involved than what I usually do. If you come up with more articles, let me know. I'm a professional editor/proofreader (who does this for large clients). That said, I track changes in Word. It would take far too much time for me to go through here and write a sentence with every single correction made.

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http://www.whyfuture.com/single-post/2016/11/06/The-Blueprints-towards-the-Development-of-Good-Artificial-Intelligence (http://www.whyfuture.com/single-post/2016/11/06/The-Blueprints-towards-the-Development-of-Good-Artificial-Intelligence)

1) "As technology is advancing the popularity of Artificial Intelligence is increasing"
"advancing the" -> "advancing, the"

2)  "AI can be a positive or negative outcome"
"or" -> "as well as a"

3) "A blueprint to consider is, learning AI can be harmed from bad teachers, for example Microsoft Tay of traits of prejudice, racist, unjustness, etc. Was a learned characteristic."
Rewrite -> A blueprint to consider is that the learning process of an AI can be harmed by bad teachers. For example, Microsoft Tay had traits of prejudice, racism, unjustness, etc. which are characteristics that it learned.

4) "Microsoft AI Tay had bad teachers that distorted and worsen the outcome of Tay"
"worsen" -> "worsened"

5) "An closed system is something to consider, where the AI is taught first."
"An" -> "A"
Rewrite -> "Something to consider is a closed system where the AI is taught first"

6) "The second blueprint we should consider is looking into how human behavior develops at a young age, learning right from wrong, what's socially acceptable"
"," -> "and"

7) "Reinforcing the best of humanity into the AI, and circumventing indulge towards self-ego, self-respect, and favoring its personal rewards at the cost of others."
"indulge" -> "indulgence"
"." -> "is a good way to teach the AI what is right

8) "Like the North Korean leader that isn't on behalf of the people, but the people are on behalf of himself for example"
Rewrite -> "We can take the North Korean leader for example, who isn't on behalf of the people, but the people are on behalf of him"

9) "You need to choose for the most ethical choice"
"choose for" -> "select" OR "choose"

10) "The different response is seen due to a moral distinction between the two situations."
"response is" -> "responses are"

11) "The interesting part is, how a psychopath answer can differ from a non-psychopath"
"psychopath" -> "psychopath's"
"non-psychopath" -> "non-psychopath's"

12)"One important distinction between the two above-mentioned situations is the state of intentions involve."
"involve" -> "involved"

13)"In the first situation sacrificing a life of a single person to save five people is justified to some extent"
"first situation" -> "first situation,"

14)"This is because in this case harming one person is just a side effect of switching the trolley in the other direction"
"because in this case harming" -> "because, in this case, harming"

15)"While in the second case the harming the fat person is intentional to saving the five people"
"second case the harming" -> "second case, harming "

16)"So in the second case you intend to kill a person to save five people"
"So in the second case you" -> "So, in the second case, you"

17) "Here you intend to pursue an action which has bad side effects. But at the same time intentionally doing harm is bad."
Rewrite -> "Here, you intend to pursue an action which has bad side effects, but, at the same time, you know that intentionally doing harm is bad"

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I just want to point out that I've seen multiple "corrections" here that are actually incorrect. How are you handling those?

I only use corrections that are actual errors, better to read, and an actual improvement to the article. Payments are for each correction that is used

What I meant was, for example, the following:

14)"This is because in this case harming one person is just a side effect of switching the trolley in the other direction"
"because in this case harming" -> "because, in this case, harming"

The first comma is erroneous. It should simply be "...because in this case, harming..."

There are many more cases throughout the page, as well.

I know, and I wouldn't of used that. However it would of pointed out one of the errors, and I would of used "because in this case, harming...."

Example: and circumventing indulge towards self-ego, "indulgence" is good.
Another example: "So, in the second case, you" | Yes this is incorrect, I'd use "So in the second case, you".

The point here is to find errors, better read on, and so on that I may of missed. And I get that "Oh that's definitely right feeling"

>Another example: "So, in the second case, you" | Yes this is incorrect, I'd use "So in the second case, you".

Technically, both are correct in this case, though the most proper way would likely be to conjoin that sentence with the prior, drop "so," and add a semicolon. That said, I didn't read the document itself so I'm not 100% sure if the conjoining would work.

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http://www.whyfuture.com/single-post/2016/11/06/The-Blueprints-towards-the-Development-of-Good-Artificial-Intelligence

Tay outcome is not what humanity needs. -> Tay's outcome is not what humanity needs.

Rewrites:

As technology is advancing the popularity of Artificial Intelligence is increasing. -> As technology continues to advance, the popularity of Artificial Intelligence increases as well.

An closed system is something to consider, where the AI is taught first. -> A closed system is something to consider, where the AI is taught first.

A blueprint to consider is, learning AI can be harmed from bad teachers, for example Microsoft Tay of traits of prejudice, racist, unjustness, etc. Was a learned characteristic. -> Learning AI can be harmed from bad teachers; Microsoft Tay is one such example. Tay had traits of prejudice, racism, and etc. All of these were learned characteristics.

The different response is seen due to a moral distinction between the two situations. -> The different response is due to a moral distinction between the two situations.

The interesting part is, how a psychopath answer can differ from a non-psychopath. -> The interesting part is how a psychopath's answer can differ from a non-psychopath.

One important distinction between the two above-mentioned situations is the state of intentions involve. -> One important distinction between the two examples is the state of the intentions involved.

But at the same time intentionally doing harm is bad. -> But, at the same time, intentionally causing harm is bad.

So similarly, In the development of Artificial Intelligence ethics. -> The same should be applied similarly to the development of Artificial Intelligence ethics.

For Example, an anonymous person’s house burns down from a fire. -> For example, an anonymous person’s house burns down from a fire.

So those higher up in the chain feel that those lower to them are of less value and importance. -> Therefore, those higher up on the chain feel that those lower than them are of less value and importance.

The fourth important blueprint to consider is the One Dimensional Perception Vs Multi-Dimensional Perception. -> The fourth important blueprint to consider is the difference between one dimensional perception and multi-dimensional perception.

Aligning AI with human values and empathy will increase the chances of a non-psychopathic vs. a psychopathic outcome. -> Alinging AI with human values and empathy will increase the chances of a non-psychopathic outcome, rather than a psychopathic one.

If the machines with Artificial Intelligence are not programmed to follow the best traits they are likely to become super-effective psychopaths as at the end of the day they are still machines. -> If the machines with Artificial Intelligence are not programmed to follow the best traits, they are likely to become super-effective psychopaths. At the end of the day, they are still machines.

The other professional reputations which might have Psychopaths include Salesperson, Surgeon, Journalist, and Police Officer. -> The other professional reputations which carry psychopaths include salespeople, surgeons, journalists, and police officers.

http://www.whyfuture.com/single-post/2016/07/01/The-future-of-Artificial-Intelligence-Ethics-on-the-Road-to-Superintelligence

When I first saw this clip, that got me thinking about how powerful AI could become. -> When I first saw this clip, it got me thinking about how powerful AI could become.

Rewrites:

It would take 29 years of 1959’s transistor global production to match one i7 Skylake transistor count. -> It would take 29 years of a 1959 transistor's production to match a single i7 Skylake transistor.

In the past civilization was limited to the usage of paper and writing which, when done by hand, tend to be slow and tedious. -> In the past, civilization was limited to the usage of paper and writing which, when done by hand, tends to be slow and tedious.

As storage, computing power and computer architecture, in general, improve over time, the interconnectivity of man goes up as well, leading to the beginnings of the Internet, the phase where humanity can globally upload, store and share information. -> As storage, computing power and computer architecture improve over time, the interconnectivity of man goes up as well. This led to the creation of the Internet, and a phase where humanity can share information all over the world.

From Deep Blue which beat world chess champion Garry Kasparov in the year 1997 to computers that you can hold in your hands, computing was used not only to perform tasks that require extensive manpower but also to surpass it. -> From Deep Blue, which beat then chess champion Garry Kasparov in 1997, to computers that can hold in your hand, computing wasn't just used for completing tasks that required manpower. It was also used to surpass it.

For example, comparing the modern smartphone to the ENIAC, the former provides a lot more computing power and is thousands of times smaller. -> For example. compare the modern smartphone to the ENIAC. A modern smartphone contains a lot more computing power for a smaller size.

What we put into the AI in the beginning such as, personality and core values, is what the AI will carry up to the universal limits. -> What we implement into the AI at the beginning, such as personality and core values, will carry the AI up to universal limits.

This AI of having a paperclip optimization goal would end us, destroying us in the process. -> An AI with a paperclip optimization goal in mind would destroy us in the process.

If we teach it good core values and have it build an inner personal web like a personal shield/defense against learning outside bad exposure before exposing it to everything else. We can maximize our chances on a better outcome than to how Tay became from Microsoft. -> If we teach it good core values and have it build an inner personal web (like a personal shield/defense against learning bad habits from the outside) before exposing it to anywhere else, we can maximize our chances on a better outcome than Tay.

Also perhaps playing dead for example could be another possibility, making Bob think the installation of the AI in the box didn't work, tricking Bob into trying to fix the AI-Box, writing a hidden firmware virus discreetly into any device he plugged in. -> Playing dead, for example, could be another possibility. The AI could make Bob think that the installation didn't work, tricking him into trying to fix the AI-Box. The AI could write a hidden firmware virus from there.

Overnight the agent has drones, robots, invade the facility, hooking up the ethernet cord into the AI-box, before you know it, the transfer is complete. -> Overnight, the agent has drones and robots invade the facility, hooking up the ethernet cord into the AI-box. Before you know it, the transfer is complete.

http://www.whyfuture.com/single-post/2016/12/02/The-Predestination-of-Artificial-Intelligence-and-the-Powerful-Future

Rewrites:

However the laws of the universe allows up to the speed of light which is 300,000KM/second. -> However, the laws ot eh universe allow the speed of light, which is 300,000 kilometers a second.

In other words this theoretically implies, an architecture the size of the human brain that operates at the speed of light, allows for either a simulation of much more neurons or the current 86 billion neurons but with multiple millions of times speedup. -> In other words, this theoretically implies that an architecture the size of a human brain that operates at the speed of light is able to simulate much more neurons. Alternatively, it could also work with the current 86 billion neurons, but at a much faster rate.

For example enforcement on drugs. -> The enforcement and following war on drugs is a good example.

Technological progress can seem small over a long time, and then rapidly become bigger exponentially. -> While technological progress may seem small over a long time, it is able to grow exponentially.

Learning from the effects of what enforcement on drugs did, it's better people instead work on better AI ethics. -> Based on the effects of the previously mentioned, it would be better to work on better AI ethics.

Take the case of notorious Mexican cartels include Sinaloa, Tijuana, Gulf, and La Familia. -> Take the case of notorious Mexican cartels in various cities: Sinaloa, Tijuana, Gulf, and La Familia.

People's intuition have a tendency towards linear thinking over exponential thinking. -> People's intuition tend to prefer linear thinking over exponential thinking.

While this person might think the future is of people flying around in jetpacks, in reality, it is far from that. -> While this person might think the future is of people flying around in jetpacks, it is far from that in reality.

Furthermore, if an alien civilization existed with just a few centuries ahead of humanity's technological progress. This civilization would have figured out the means of extending their brain-neo cortex, and redesigning their wetware. -> Furthermore, if an alien civilization had technology several centuries ahead of humanity, it would have been able to extend their brain-neo cortex, therefore redesigning their wetware.

Some possible ideas, using nanorobots that taps into the cloud enabling neocortex extension. -> Using nanobots that tap into the cloud is a possible idea.

A japanese that envisioned a concept similar of nature: -> A Japanese video that envisioned a similar concept:

Each von-Neumann self replicating craft build a copy of itself, on the 41th step there would be over one trillion replicated space crafts! Making any mega space projections a theoretical reality. -> If each self replicating craft built a copy of itself, there would be over one trillion space crafts! This makes mega space projections a theoretical yet possible reality.

An interesting side note, why haven't SETI found any alien activity yet? SETI (Search for Extraterrestrial Intelligence) has scanned billions of stars and so far hasn't discovered and found anything. -> An interesting side note, why haven't SETI (Search for Extraterrestrial Intelligence) found any alien activity yet? SETI has scanned billions of stars and, as of this post, hasn't discovered any signs.

http://www.whyfuture.com/single-post/2017/01/20/Leading-the-Path-of-Artificial-Intelligence-to-the-Road-of-Altruism

Rewrites:

People that tries to outlaw research around strong-AI can instead backfire and make a future finished strong-AI worse. -> People's attempts to defy research around this AI can backfire and worsen our future.

From this one can conclude psychopaths treat others as tools, and of placing themselves highly on a pedestal much like a king on a throne. -> From this, one can conclude that psychopaths treat others as tools, placing themselves highly on a pedestal much like a king on a throne.

To implement the best in Artificial Intelligence is to represent the best of human traits. -> To implement the best traits in artificial intelligence, we must represent the best of human traits.

One can conclude that how can some individuals generate such a large circle of compassion that they are willing to do acts of compassion such as giving their kidney to a complete stranger? -> One could conclude: How can some individuals create a circle of compassion large enough to perform such acts?

This is one of such examples of psychopaths tending to use others as outlets for their own personal conveniences and be completely cold. -> This is one of the examples of a psychopath's manipulation and their lack of empathy.

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There are only 4 articles are they not done yet ? I ask because I do not want to quick over and article then be told someone else got to it first so please explain this to me so I can gp through all 4 articles for you. Or do you just pay even though it's already been done to compare notes and make changes ? Please get back to me asap thank you very much.

http://www.whyfuture.com/single-post/2017/01/20/Leading-the-Path-of-Artificial-Intelligence-to-the-Road-of-Altruism (http://www.whyfuture.com/single-post/2017/01/20/Leading-the-Path-of-Artificial-Intelligence-to-the-Road-of-Altruism)
People that tries (try) to outlaw research around strong-AI can instead backfire and make a future finished strong-AI worse.
People wouldn't want others working (working on) undercover, secret projects, and so on.
So to ensure a good artificial intelligence future (in the future) for humanity, AI (cut it) people need to model artificial intelligence on altruism.
With a lack of sympathy and care  (caring) at the cost of others, "Does (Will) becoming friends  (friend) with this person benefit me in any way, do (will) I gain something from this?"
For example, one might see a psychopathic man jump (jumping) into a relationship with a woman and dump her in a heartbeat without much thought (thinking much).
http://www.whyfuture.com/single-post/2016/12/02/The-Predestination-of-Artificial-Intelligence-and-the-Powerful-Future (http://www.whyfuture.com/single-post/2016/12/02/The-Predestination-of-Artificial-Intelligence-and-the-Powerful-Future)
It enhances enhancing human activities by complementing what people are capable of doing.
For example, a car can exceed 100KM/hour, faster then (than) any animal on the planet (Earth).
The human brain is orders of magnitude lower then (than) what is theoretically possible.
Author Note: This speculation calculations may or may not be correct, take it lightly. One thing for sure is the human brain is nowhere near the limits of intelligence is the message that it conveys. (This sentence was written too small that I can't even read).
Human brain neurons range in size from 4 micron (microns) to 100 microns which converts to 4,000 NM to 100,000NM
Now, if humanity were to receive a message from extraterrestrials, "Hey fellow humans, we have dispatched an alien mothership, and we are going to arrive somewhere (get in Earth) in the next 50-100 years", what would we do?
This, for sure, would be taken a lot more seriously by others, and many further measures will be undertaken as preparations for this future event.
A lot of philosophers or intellectuals are convinced (convinced that) singularity will be fast-tracked by very rapid technological and scientific transformation.
These changes will be so philosophical, quick and overwhelming that every facet of society will be transformed.
These include (includes/ including) governments, economies, businesses, families, and individuals.
The bottom line is that it is practically impossible to describe how the world wide web works and how it impacts modern society.
Technological progress can seem small(be developed slowly) over a long time, and then rapidly become bigger (rapidly developed in a short time).
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http://www.whyfuture.com/single-post/2016/11/06/The-Blueprints-towards-the-Development-of-Good-Artificial-Intelligence


1. As technology is advancing, the popularity of Artificial Intelligence is increasing.   (no right punctuation)
2. An closed system is something to consider, where the AI is taught first.
3. This is because in this the case of harming one person is just a side effect of switching the trolley in the other direction.
4.While in the second case, the harming the fat person is intentional to saving the five people.
5. The closer you are able to create the human brain as naturally as it is, the better it is.
6. However, with evolution, a tribe may abandon ones that  ratherharm than help, thus weeding out the negative ones.
 change to: However, with evolution, a tribe may abandon ones that harm rather than help, thus weeding out the negative ones.
7.While a multidimensional perception focuses and looks at the cause and effect of things as to why they are like this.
change to: While a multidimensional perception focuses and looks at the cause and effect of things as to why they are happening.



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There are some altruistic people that will donate one of their kidneys to a complete stranger. One can conclude that how can some individuals generate such a large circle of compassion that they are willing to do acts of compassion such as giving their kidney to a complete stranger?

There are some altruistic people that will donate one of their kidneys to a complete stranger. One can wonder how some individuals generate such a large circle of compassion that they are willing to do such acts of compassion as giving their kidney to a complete stranger.



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As technology is advancing the popularity of Artificial Intelligence is increasing. Fully analyzing all the blueprints for good Artificial Intelligence is crucial. AI can be a positive or negative outcome. The beginning stages of AI development can overlook certain aspects of ethical modeling.

As technology is advancing, the popularity of Artificial Intelligence is increasing, full analysis of all blueprints for good Artificial Intelligence is crucial. AI can produce a positive or negative outcome. Development of less powerful AI can overlook certain aspects of ethical modeling.

A blueprint to consider is, learning AI can be harmed from bad teachers, for example Microsoft Tay of traits of prejudice, racist, unjustness, etc. Was a learned characteristic. What we need is a guard against bad teachers.

A blueprint to consider is arming of learning AI against bad teachers, for example Microsoft built AI called Tay had traits of prejudice, racism, injustice, etc were learnt characteristics. What we need is a guard against bad teachers.


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http://www.whyfuture.com/single-post/2016/12/02/The-Predestination-of-Artificial-Intelligence-and-the-Powerful-Future


Artificial Intelligence is potent enough to make an impact on human life. It enhances enhancing  human activities by complementing what people are capable of doing.
What is the destiny of Artificial Intelligence? Are sophisticated computers reshaping the future of humankind?

Why should one care about the technological singularity?Technological singularity is the pivotal moment in history when artificial intelligence transcends human intelligence. People should be accustomed to the fact that the human brain isn't the highest possible intelligence achievable. For example, a car can exceed 100KM/hour, faster then any animal on the planet. However the laws of the universe allows up to the speed of light which is 300,000KM/second. (300,000/(100/3600))=10,800,000X faster. The human brain has a lower magnitude than what is theoretically possible.

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1)http://www.whyfuture.com/single-post/2016/11/06/The-Blueprints-towards-the-Development-of-Good-Artificial-Intelligence

1- A blueprint to consider is, learning AI can be harmed from by bad teachers, for example Microsoft Tay of traits of prejudice, racist, unjustness, etc. Was a learned characteristic. What we need is a guard against bad teachers.

2- An A closed system is something to consider, where the AI is taught first. Built with an inner-web of positive attributes first and an internal defense against bad wrong information. Taught to know what's right from wrong. Taught to reject bad teachers, and to filter out the bad information. Tay outcome is not what humanity needs.

3- Steps to Consider towards Towards Ethical Modeling ( In titles, words are usually capitalized (except , coordinating conjunctions and short prepositions that are in the middle of the title).

4- The second blueprint we should consider is looking into how human behavior develops at a young age, learning right from wrong, what's socially acceptable. How children learn, (Unnecessary comma)   can be valuable a valuable tool for better AI development.

5- Like the North Korean leader that isn’t on behalf of the people, but the people are on behalf of himself himself, for example. (Missing comma)

6- A significant blueprint to consider when developing Artificial Intelligence is the Ethical Paradox. Ethical Paradox is explained through the following trolley problem. The trolley problem is a thought experiment in the ethics ethics.

7-  At On the other side of the track, there is another single person standing. If you are standing in the yard alongside the train track next to the lever lever, you have two options to pursue. Firstly, you can do nothing and let the five people on the track die as the trolley crashes into them. The other option is to move the lever’s direction towards the direction where a single man is standing. In this way, you will save the five people. You need to choose for choose the most ethical choice. The majority of the people will choose the second option and save five people

8- One important distinction between the two above-mentioned situations is the state of intentions involve involves. In the first situation sacrificing a the life of a single person to save five people is justified to some extent.

9- While in the second case case, the harming the fat person is intentional to saving the five people.

10- So similarly, In in the development of Artificial Intelligence ethics.

11- Psychopaths tend to put self-pride, and it's its own values above other people. For example, the North Korean leader people treat the North Korean leader with pride and respect.

12- Self-pleasure gained, or entertainment pleasures thus are more valuable in psychopaths. In the world of psychopaths, people raise themselves to the top and succeeding positions such as CEO CEOs, lawyers, and other professional reputations.

13- Being ruthless and powerful can make you more successful than charitable, altruism, kind hearted kind-hearted individuals.

14, If the machines with Artificial Intelligence are not programmed programed (American spelling) to follow the best traits traits, they are likely to become super-effective psychopaths as at the end of the day they are still machines.

15- "there There can exist any combination of intelligence and final goal in an AI". .” Psychopaths lack empathy, when developing good artificial

16- The Topology position Position View

17- Higher The higher positions in the chain should not look those lower to them in an inferior way. In any way anyway, those lower to you are not of less value and importance. You need to for sure then correct this wrong and negative view.

18- The One One Dimensional Perception Vs vs Multidimensional Perception

2)http://www.whyfuture.com/single-post/2016/07/01/The-future-of-Artificial-Intelligence-Ethics-on-the-Road-to-Superintelligence

1-  But one must remember that, at some point, the number from of  which the count started will be totally indistinguishable to the end result.

2- The development of technology over time (Should be capitalized.)


3-  It would take 29 years of 1959’s 1959 transistor global production to match one i7 Skylake transistor count.

4- Technology builds upon technology ( In titles, words are usually capitalized )

5- More advanced technology gives us the better best means of designing even more sophisticated technology.

6- here will come a time where when progress is noticeable by the second.

7- more possible games compared to chess. Go also allows the player more freedom for of movement,

8- We, as innovation-oriented species, tend to project our ideas outwards in a linear path. For example, one can look in at old TV shows’ predictions

9- Artificial intelligence, on the other hand, which is assumed to lie a step above, can move a step higher with ease because of the combined intelligence of both both of us and AI.

10- Humans have enough cognitive are cognitive enough to have a container able to hold a complex language structure, communicate to with each other, and a social construct.

11- A bad superintelligence super bad intelligence is one that will make bad decisions which in return can be very bad for us

12- It be is like a ferry captain sailing the ferry off course


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