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Title: I write fiction...
Post by: no to the gold cult on February 18, 2011, 10:04:01 AM
Here's a peice, it's a short phsycological thriller sort of thing...
http://www.scribd.com/doc/32589712/Shadow-in-the-Water

I'm trying to motivate myself to write more, so if you think this one was any good, donations are welcome: 16yF2LVLi8iViz2NanFL2mzpoW61HGpBup

Next idea is for a sci-fi peice. :)


Title: Re: I write fiction...
Post by: kiba on February 18, 2011, 08:51:09 PM
This should be moved to the marketplace.


Title: Re: I write fiction...
Post by: theymos on February 18, 2011, 11:32:12 PM
Good writing, though it could use some editing. I see many comma splices and other errors.


Title: Re: I write fiction...
Post by: no to the gold cult on February 19, 2011, 12:59:05 PM
Thanks for the feedback, it's really appreciated.



Title: Re: I write fiction...
Post by: no to the gold cult on February 19, 2011, 11:45:23 PM
Oh, and thanks for the donation too, whoever it was. :)