Hey man. I'm always up for anything - so I gave it a read and here's what I thought.
Explain it like I'm five years old: I'm neither a mathematician or a statistician. You need to fully explain what's happening with my funds, and provide me with a working in depth example - not the basic one you gave
You need to be unique: What differentiates you from the thousands of other projects that have tried the exact same thing and failed? If your answer begins with: "the only difference" then I'm out.
Whitepaper is far too short: What sort of poverty are you trying to alleviate? Anything in particular? The world is so full of nasty shit these days, just saying "poverty" isn't going to cut it
Why aren't you on Kickstarter? If you can adequately explain to your audience how you couldn't possibly copy this project and put it on kickstarter using real-world money then you're probably onto a winner. Why is crypto integral to this project?
I could think of a few more but I think these need addressing first!
Hope that helps
Great feedback! I'll try my best to clarify...Explain it like I'm five years old: I'm neither a mathematician or a statistician. You need to fully explain what's happening with my funds, and provide me with a working in depth example - not the basic one you gave
You need to be unique: What differentiates you from the thousands of other projects that have tried the exact same thing and failed? If your answer begins with: "the only difference" then I'm out.
Whitepaper is far too short: What sort of poverty are you trying to alleviate? Anything in particular? The world is so full of nasty shit these days, just saying "poverty" isn't going to cut it
Why aren't you on Kickstarter? If you can adequately explain to your audience how you couldn't possibly copy this project and put it on kickstarter using real-world money then you're probably onto a winner. Why is crypto integral to this project?
I could think of a few more but I think these need addressing first!
Hope that helps
1) When you deposit your funds:
1% will go to the investor's dividend pool. If you deposit 100 coins, the dividend pool will receive 1 coin.
1% will to the one who referred you to the program.
1% will go to Marketing.
and 1% will go to the developer.
You, as the investor, will receive a credited balance of 96% of the deposit and will begin accumulating dividends. In 24 hours, the total amount of the accumulated dividends will be 1% of the credited balance; 0.96 coins. If you withdraw your credited balance, the dividends will stop accumulating.
2) What makes this project unique are 2 things:
1- the algorithm will invest the same amount that is credited to the investor and the dividends from the algorithm's investment will go back to the dividend pool
2- you can withdraw your credited balance anytime you wish
3) I understand that the word "poverty" is very broad. My intent and overall objective is to offer an investment opportunity to people with limited financial resources. For the "averge Joe," earning an additional $10.00 to $50.00 a day, or more, will make a huge impact & increase their capacity to provide for their families.
4) Going on Kickstarter never crossed my mind. I have never used them so I am not familiar with how they work.
I hope these additional details are helpful.