New webpage looks nice..
Some corrections
100% of collected Donations go to charity
instead of "goes" to charity
Under Mission:
Our mission is to help the less fortunate. So many people in the world are in desperate and horrible circumstances. Simple things like clean water, make a world of difference to those in need.1 in 8 people lack access to clean water. We can change that. We can help those people in desperate need!
Under why:
the last word is .. Anyone and then nothing.. What's it supposed to say ?
Change the red donate button to Donate with Paypal. It's not clear
Change Bitcoin - 12Ejyimqj4BAmqEHVTpGaym3rzJ3geDio3 to Donate with Bitcoin! 12Ejyimqj4BAmqEHVTpGaym3rzJ3geDio3 and leave some space and clean it up between the donate button and that address and leave a space below it.
On
http://coexistcoin.com/homeAnyone and everyone >> have << access to see all transactions on the blockchain by using the block explorer. Change to "has"
No more abuse like only 10% of each dollar being used toward the cause. to No more abuse; like only 10% of each dollar being used toward the cause.
reduce the space below, "Read Justin Wrens story at above link. It is a very inspirational tale." to be consistent with the spaces below the others
Organization is misspelled in every occurrence.
A portion of our collected donations will be used to go toward the water4.org. They empower locals to build and mantain their own water well. Educate and supply all thats needed to bring clean water to those communities that need it. rewrite that as... A portion of our collected donations go to water4.org. Water4.org empowers impoverished peoples by teaching them to build and mantain shared water wells. They educate and supply all that is needed to those communities in need.
Change, "Coexist.org is a special orginization (sp). They are helping break the cycle of conflict by creating opportunities for people to work and learn together. coexist.org is in more than 33 countries helping people come together."
change that to, "Coexist.org is a special organization. We are helping break the cycle of conflict by creating opportunities for people to work and learn together. Coexist.org is in more than 33 countries helping people come together."
change, "Donors can easily donate in any method or currency desired and then tracks exactly where donated funds are going."
to, "Donors can easily donate in any method or currency they desire and then track exactly where thier donated funds are going."
under
"What's Next"Change, "To better serve donor to organization transactions we are working on building an updated cutting edge explorer intergraded within a fiat to CoExistCoin exchange."
to, "To better serve donor to organization transactions, we are working on building an updated cutting edge explorer. The explorer will be integrated within a "fiat to CoExistCoin" exchange." ?
Change' "CoExistCoin algorithm is x11. Although this is still a terrific algo, it is a bit outdated when it comes to miners digitally mining CoExistCoin. We are exploring other algorithms when we update our source code to better keep mining rewards fair to all."
to, "CoExistCoin uses the x11 algorithm. Although this is still a terrific algo, it is a bit outdated when it comes to miners, digitally mining CoExistCoin. We are exploring other algorithms. When we update our source code we will switch the algo to better keep mining rewards fair to all."
add a "In" before January 2017
Change," Any questions or inquiries about anything we are doing please email me
CoExistCoin@gmail.com "
to, " If you have any questions about any aspect of our project, feel free to email me; Philip Lima at
CoExistCoin@gmail.com"
on
http://coexistcoin.com/donateChange Bitcoin and Coexist Coin to
Donate Bitcoin at the following address:
Donate CoexistCoin at the following address:
Change the red donate button to Donate with Credit Card or Donate with Paypal
Link this to the actual explorer " You use that id and input it in the explorer " and change id to ID
Change, "You can track that transaction" to "You can track each and every transaction"
Change, "We recommend you get bitcoin through Circle.com Circle accepts credit cards and other payments. They are safe and secure and easy to use."
to "We recommend that you purchse Bitcoin through Circle.com.
Circle.com accepts credit cards and other payments. They are safe, secure, reliable, proven and easy to use."
Change, "Bitcoin transactions can take anywhere from 15 mins to 45 mins to completely confirm transaction." to "Bitcoin transactions can take anywhere from 15 to 45 mins to completely confirm the transaction."
Change, "Also our project is to use CoExistCoin's blockchain to record charitible (misspelled) donations. " to "Also, part of our project is to use CoExistCoin's blockchain to record charitable donations. "
Add to the end. Thank You so very much for becoming part of a team who's sole desire is to use modern technology to help others and keep charity's on the right path.
Thank You for being at the forefront of a new day.
and change your picture to one where you are smiling. Mr. Serious, well except for the lobster bib lol
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