I think the problem is there's no guarantee that any artist / designer / typographer will get paid for their work. Any artist worth their salt would charge at least £200 / $300 (ish) for a job like this (a guaranteed sum, rather than a 'as long as no one does better than you' kind of thing).

I'll keep an open mind but if this the final result, i'd have to say i don't like the message or the way its delivered

It's in the original buttermilk font, i haven't made the Heart shape out of outlines, but flown the text naturally with the font itself. I think that since you'll be tattooing it where you're heart is on your chest, it'll get the message across, and will hint it as the text has been re sized and arranged into a heart shape. Overall, the text is clear, and gets the message across, the links between the separate words show a connection, the arch on top with the T and H also show a connection and emphasize the heart shape a little more, but keeps it overall,subtle.

I'd like to clean the lines a little more but anyways this is the gist of it.