I have read and understand why some fail to focus on your attempt to explain what your script does, it's benefits and how it works. The web "design" issues would be irrelevant as far as the coding for your script is functional and does as it designed,

The problem is getting to understand your scripts functionality and advantages from your site it in its current state.

I would much rather listen to your actual voice reading the copy.  I only played a few minutes due to robot sound.

Or consider possibly an  audio interview type presentation even over a phone line where someone could ask you and you are able to explain the details.

Feel free to contact me if I can be of any help.

Good luck, keep on scripting.

Johnny
www.trepo.org