Designed of the Announcement isnt good. I think for a startup project at least hire someone can make your project appealing to readers.

Also incorporating exchanges in the announcement is not a good move. Most of the projects did these have not work out in the past. Cause the thumb rule for those exchange mostly are dont announced the potential listing or called NDA.

Im smelling a rubbish design of your project no offense but if you really wanted to be known, do your best.

i guess, they just put all those logos as placeholders. i don't think they have closed their deals with them as they are just starting their ICO here.

@ OP, since you are aiming to produce Visa Card RYM, do you have arrangement with Visa issuer already?

and listing in top 15 trading platforms by June? I think they should be conservative with their goals here.

Exchanges listing
Hitbtc,Hotbit,Yobit,Crex24,Marcatox   and other.Do you have agreements with these exchanges or just posted their logos on your website?