Interesting stuff. Where did you film it? I really like the look of the landscape and the buildings, it reminds me of Eastern Europe.
I'll give you some constructive criticism, I love some of the shots (eg the character in the grass, and the walking away shot) but I think the film needs more of a narrative running through it, and some more diverse shots and editing. You could have, for example, used some flashback shots to give a reason for the chilling climax, or simply made it look more like a journey rather than a collection of random shots. I know how hard it is, I've dabbled in filmmaking myself.
Also, the edits seem a little forced in places, because they're mostly in time with the music. I would have started with less cuts and kept it slow at the beginning, maybe used some fade transitions, then made the edits faster and more frantic towards the end, building a crescendo for the climax.
I don't mean to be rude, It's good to see some original stuff on this forum, keep it up!
Wow. Thank You very much!!
This is really valuable opinion man. We deffinetly gonna take this in count on next projects. Saved this.
