Anyone care to provide some feedback for an ICO whitepaper?

Just looking to get some feedback for an ICO we're releasing within the next 8 days. The initial sale will be short and sizeable, and so any feedback will be rewarded via prior knowledge of the release.

A bit of background info on the offering:

* We're an exchange with a working product looking to raise around 200 million.

* First government regulated peer-to-peer Crypto-currency exchange (application pending)

* First government regulated peer-to-peer U. S. Stock Exchange

* The four technological components that makes us unique are patented in the US.

* The affiliate company has received verbal agreements for utilization by some of the largest institutions in the financial sector.

* Tokens effective as utilities for the exchange, *and* for redeeming royalties from gross company revenue.

This, and much more is outlined in the aforementioned whitepaper.

We are especially interested in receiving feedback concerning the logistics from which our tokens will derive their value.

Please give a little background info about yourself and an email to contact you at.

Thanks in advance.