Rate my first text

[MisterPipka]

Hello. I ask you to evaluate my first text and express my opinion. https://steemit.com/bitcoin/@misterpipka/bitcoin-price-forecast I think that I am absolutely right, but I will not refuse criticism either! Thank you!

[mangodebango]

You raise some interesting thoughts but I'd expand on it a little. Might also need a slight retweak with your English there. 

[Jake Carlo]

That thing "nakakakilig"

[MisterPipka]

You raise some interesting thoughts but I'd expand on it a little. Might also need a slight retweak with your English there. 

Many thanks for the answer. my English needs to be improved (((