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You're not an experienced English writer! Your post is proof.
Incorrect, I am a native English writer. However, I'm also writing 10 things at once. I've now corrected my mistakes Sherlock.
That last sentence doesn't make sense. If you meant to address someone named Sherlock, you would need a comma after the word mistakes.
If your intent with your first post was to attract an employer, I suggest you stop doing a shitty job on ten things, and focus on doing a good job on one thing. It's elementary, Watson.
That was a freebie, any more corrections or advice will cost you.