Need Your Feedback on a Bitcoin Project Slogan

[darcon_pr]

Hello, guys. Hope all of you are alright on this difficult times.

We are working in a slogan for our project and just want your opinion on this one. http://prnt.sc/rrw04a

Please ignore the artwork, that's just a Logo Muckup. Just tell me if by reading the slogan it catches you. like, Wow!! How does that work? I want to know more about it, Etc..

It's not my intention to promote anything here so I removed the project's name from the logo. Just interested on your honest reaction on the slogan.

Thank you in advance guys.

UPDATE: Thank you very much for all of your feedback guys, we really appreciate it.
We decided to update the slogan. Even when our project aims to help BTC reach mass adoption, that phrase sounds too pretentious on the slogan. We realized "BTC mass adoption" is a really sensible topic to the BTC community so we don't want the slogan to look offensive or like a sort of click bate.
Here is the new one: https://prnt.sc/rt2afa

For those of you interested to know in some of the services the platform will provide for BTC, I created a post highlighting some of them here: https://bitcointalk.org/index.php?topic=5237727.msg54152164#msg54152164 

Please give me your thoughts

[BitcoinGirl.Club]

The bitcoin Bodyguard
"Get ready for bitcoin mass addoption"

May be you want to check the spelling of adoption other than that it looks good to me but if you could tell a little about your project then may be you will be able to find good feedback from the users.

[darcon_pr]

Thank you very much for your feedback BitcoinGirl.Club

I see that the slogan made you want to know more about what the project is about. That's exactly what we are looking for.

As I mentioned, it's not my intereste promoting the project in anyway, this is not the right place.
All I can tell you is that the project aims to take care of BTC security and  micro payments.

I corrected grammar error on the logo you pointed out. Thank you very much for the observation.

[Vod]

I see that the slogan made you want to know more about what the project is about. That's exactly what we are looking for.

Well, that's not what BitcoinGirl.Club posted.  Also, there is no reason that image needs to be 3.3MB in size.  :/

[LeGaulois]

"Get ready for bitcoin mass adoption" doesn't fit well with "the Bitcoin bodyguard", especially if it's about security because both are somehow unrelated. I mean 1) doesn't give an indication about 2). If you got it. I would rather put something like "Get protected" or something around.

Also, you should use Bitcoin and not bitcoin, there is a difference between both.
If I can add my 2 cents about the design, a very dark background and black text aren't really what you should use. Maybe using the color gold or white would give a better result.

[darcon_pr]

Hey guys. Thank you very much for your feedbacks. We really appreciate you taking your time to help us with this. We are taking notes 

[logfiles]

I liked the Bitcoin bodyguard part. Correlates well with the intentions of your project. However, i would suggest you try to look for much more suitable taglines like Defend/Secure your Bitcoin(s) or Defending?securing your Bitcoin(s) etc
 

[Harlot]

IMHO I wouldn't be focusing on my project's slogan too much if your own project cannot live the hype your slogan brings, who knows it might bite you back when no development is happening with your project at all. "Get ready for mass adoption" sound really good but really you must as yourself if you can carry it out for your project. I mean what type of project do you have in order to bring mass adoption your project is promising? And can this type of project really push people to change from fiat and other payments and start using Bitcoin because of this project? If your project won't do exactly what your slogan is saying I would recommend on thinking other slogans that would really fit in your project.

[Chlotide]

The bitcoin Bodyguard
"Get ready for bitcoin mass addoption"

Made me think about a LN easy to use hardware wallet (tho pretty sure that's not what it's about... would be cool tho )).)
Bitcoin Bodyguard sounds weird.
A simple slogan can do wonders. "Get secure for Bitcoin mass adoption" or smth in those lines I guess

[darcon_pr]

Hello, and thank you again for your feedback guys. I just updated the main post. please check it and feel free to give us your opinion.

[Saisher]

I liked the Bitcoin bodyguard part. Correlates well with the intentions of your project. However, i would suggest you try to look for much more suitable taglines like Defend/Secure your Bitcoin(s) or Defending?securing your Bitcoin(s) etc
 

I also like the bodyguard part if you can live up to the name, the slogan is good as long as it will live up to the expectation of the people, it's  a good invitation to look on a project and it's features but at the end of the day it's still the features and the service you provided and it's results.

[SFR10]

Hello, and thank you again for your feedback guys. I just updated the main post. please check it and feel free to give us your opinion.

It goes well with what you're trying to achieve or rather to create but based on the other thread, I highly doubt you'll be able to do everything in the way you mentioned there.

[Vod]

I like the tagline on the tagline.   

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