Euh ! that's one weird kitchen?! Ok sorry joke coudn't help my self
Ok now bad joke asides
Well first of all it's a good start, while it remains not perfect, it is a good start and the right direction
There are some few things that are quite noticeable, the news flash coinsomething thing that keeps showing after each news
The accent is quite heavy I assume not an English native speaker, it is not bad but combined with a certain lack of dynamics in speech makes more noticeable, I think she should be more natural
Another issue was reading from notes and that's bad for a couple of reasons, it shows (or at least makes it look) that the girl doesn't know what she is speaking about hence no bitcoin connection, and it also shows a lack of preparation, (its a 30min video just a few things to memorize....)
That being said it's a good start, and not everything can be perfect from the begining, it's already decent, and the point I've mentioned are just to make it even better
Wow, thank you for a great comment. And nice joke, I like your sense of humor
