Simple - help me fix up/make a windows 8 logo! URGENT!

[monbux]

So, I'm kind of bored and decided to make this. (5 min job)
I really need suggestions/fix-ups... read below the image!



Any changes, suggestions, ETC?

It is designed for (demographics):

Gender: Male
Age: 20 - 29

Also include a short description of what changes you made and why you made those changes, how you would advertise the product with the new logo and slogan, and how does it fit with the demographic.

This is for non-profit purposes, and as you can see I spent a very small amount of time working on it... not asking for too much, I can just send you $5 if I like the job (preferably paypal).

***Please, I would appreciate any suggestions, and please also explain why!  Thank you, hope to post finished product here ***

[BawsyBoss]

Is the purpose of this image to advertise and promote Windows 8? If so, it should probably be more to-the-point in explaining why you need Windows 8 in your life.

[monbux]

Is the purpose of this image to advertise and promote Windows 8? If so, it should probably be more to-the-point in explaining why you need Windows 8 in your life.

Somewhat.  Maybe to show a few friends or something.  It's to 20 - 29 year olds, and that age group is desperate for love, money, and a stable job (last two kind of go together)  I don't really know how I could have incorporated money or a profession onto a windows 8 logo, so I decided to go with love, a warm heart, blah blah blah.   Any suggestions?

[devthedev]

Cleaner rounding around the heart and no orange border (:

[monbux]

Cleaner rounding around the heart and no orange border (:

The heart was meant to look messy as for the life/heart was "Still shaping"  but I'll consider that, thanks.. Did think the orange looked a bit odd, originally it was supposed to add a masculine feel to it lol.

[tspacepilot]

I find this so confusing.  You're making an advert for Windows^TMand you say it's not for profit?  I'm sure there's some explanation, but isn't Windows^TM like the most canonical example of for-profit?  I think they do plenty of their own advertizing, do you work for them?

[BawsyBoss]

I find this so confusing.  You're making an advert for Windows^TMand you say it's not for profit?  I'm sure there's some explanation, but isn't Windows^TM like the most canonical example of for-profit?  I think they do plenty of their own advertizing, do you work for them?

He already mentioned the fact that this is not actually corporate-level advertising. Just to a small group of people in order to persuade them or such.

[monbux]

I find this so confusing.  You're making an advert for Windows^TMand you say it's not for profit?  I'm sure there's some explanation, but isn't Windows^TM like the most canonical example of for-profit?  I think they do plenty of their own advertizing, do you work for them?

He already mentioned the fact that this is not actually corporate-level advertising. Just to a small group of people in order to persuade them or such.

Yes, just making it for the heck of it.  Will not be using it to promote/endorse windows, nor will it actually be released publicly... (I guess here is an exception xD) Anyways I pretty much finished it, I am still open to suggestions!

[devthedev]

I find this so confusing.  You're making an advert for Windows^TMand you say it's not for profit?  I'm sure there's some explanation, but isn't Windows^TM like the most canonical example of for-profit?  I think they do plenty of their own advertizing, do you work for them?

He already mentioned the fact that this is not actually corporate-level advertising. Just to a small group of people in order to persuade them or such.

Yes, just making it for the heck of it.  Will not be using it to promote/endorse windows, nor will it actually be released publicly... (I guess here is an exception xD) Anyways I pretty much finished it, I am still open to suggestions!

I was just about to throw something together in Photoshop for you. Show us the final product :D