This is very much uncalled for and I don't see it to be a poem at all. You can get samples of poem from @Lordhermes, he is a state in the art for now in poem writing as per bitcointalkforum. Here is one of his poems, you can reference it for tips:
https://bitcointalk.org/index.php?topic=5268226.0Your said poem is rather too short and it's got zero stanza though, might have a little rhythme. It was nice of you to try though, but this one is rather pretty much seems like you spamming the forum to me.
If you really want to write poems, try walking in the shoes of the poets you know and be in their imaginations to see a way that you could relate it to cryptocurrency and let's see how it goes.