If you're okay with receiving critique, it looks a bit messy and unfinished right now, I can't do handwriting for shit, so if I ever do anything with text I would immediately use the text tool so people can read it clearly because right now I can only just make out some of the words because of the way they're arranged and I don't have bad eyesight either. It's only a cartoon so you obviously don't need to worry about proportions or anything but I'd say the line thickness isn't drawn right because I keep thinking the face isn't a face but some lines and shapes mixed in with the overall objects you're trying to make. Looking at it closer I can see you've done the thickness a bit, but it's too subtle, you'll need to exaggerate it more.
I think you've made the same mistake I made often of putting things for people to look at too damn early
I know it's WIP but you should work on that more so it looks 'almost' finished rather than WIP if that makes any sense because most people aren't going to get it. Also, I do get the cartoon, it was just difficult because of the drawing I think, china is growing out of the U.S economy, Obama is siphoning the money off to bestbuy? ( lol ) and canada is pumping money into the US economy?
While it's not a bad cartoon I can't agree with any of that because it's actually china that's propping up the US economy and the US economy is essentially siphoning off everything else from the rest of the world by trading worthless paper money for everyone's valuables but there you go, freedom of speech.
