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Info: Looking for swarm intelligence, applying the many.

Article: http://www.whyfuture.com/single-post/2016/07/01/The-future-of-Artificial-Intelligence-Ethics-on-the-Road-to-Superintelligence

Pick a paragraph in the article, and suggest a few changes to the sentences/grammar.


Prize: 0.00005 BTC per correction, mark the correction in red bold.
Prize: 0.00015 BTC per sentence rewrites that is better and used.

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Example submit:

"The quick brown fox jumbs over the lazy dog"
"jumbs" -> "jumps"

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What to look for

-Spelling mistakes
-Grammar mistakes
-Incorrect word usage, example: "than" instead of "then"
-Comma placement, colon
-Word change suggestions
-Removal of a word/unnecessary (Example: "Bob is more happy eating his favorite pizza" -> "Bob is happy eating his favorite pizza"

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[ZeyadS]

"destined to an dystopian world?"

"an" -> "a"

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[divinemaniac]

Paragraph 1:
The human brain, consisting of roughly 86 billion neurons, rivals the world’s best supercomputers in terms of magnitude, efficiency, and speed, using as little energy as a small 20-watt light bulb. Human evolution took tens of thousands of years to adapt noticeable brain size and architecture changes.

"consisting" => "which consists"
"to adapt noticeable" => "in order to adapt to a noticeable"
"architecture" => "architectural"

Paragraph 2:
Evolution is a slow process that can take eons for changes to occur.

"that can take eons for changes to occur" => "in which changes can take eons to occur"
The development of technology over time:
In the year 1959, a year of global transistor output of 60 million transistors was considered extraordinary. It was deemed a manufacturing achievement to produce such a significant amount. Although looking at the world today, it pales in comparison to how far the transistor development has come.

"a year of global transistor output of 60 million transistors was considered extraordinary" => "a global transistor output of 60 million transistors per year"

"the transistor development" => "the development of transistors"

Technology builds upon technology:
 
Technology helps build better technology. We can see that in the past, civilization was limited to the usage of paper and writing. Calculations done by hand tend to be slow and tedious. More advanced technology gives us the better means of designing even more sophisticated technology.
............
See, civilization started at a point where little progress is seen over a long time

"We can see that in the past" =>  "In the past"
"the" => "a"
"is" => "could be"


It's true the person above us can think at a higher level compared to the person below, however the human brain can come up with concepts of n+1 and the idea of an intelligence staircase.

"It's true the" => "It is true that the"
"above us" => "above"
"below," => "below."
"however" => "However,"
"However don't forget, this SI would for all and purposes would seem godly to us."
=> "However, don't forget that this SI would, for all purposes, seem godly to us."

Like a ferry and a captain who cares for the safety of his passengers, one whose gets us to our destination

"cares" => "care"
"his" => "their"
", one whose gets us to our destination" => "and get us to our destinations"


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[onemd]

"destined to an dystopian world?"

"an" -> "a"

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[ZeyadS]

- Don't climb that mountain human, It's too dangerous
- Don't breed with that partner you like human, this other one you don't like will

",human,"

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[ZeyadS]

"It's because of this, the SI should value humans more than people would to ants/mouses regardless of the difference of gap" -> "because of this, the SI should value humans more than people that would like to be ants/mouses regardless of the difference of gap"

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[ZeyadS]

"Side note, recommended read"
"read" -> "article"

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[CryptoDatabase]

"Technology, on the other hand, is amazing in terms of how fast it is moving along, blending into the world seamlessly."

"Technology, on the other hand, is amazing in terms of how fast it is moving along while blending into the world seamlessly."


"that heats up 1/10th of a degree Celsius every ten seconds."

"that heats up by 1/10th of a degree Celsius every ten seconds."


"Let's take a gigantic chessboard"

"Lets take a gigantic chessboard"


"and place each grain of rice to a corresponding chess square"

"and place each grain of rice onto a corresponding chess square"


"for each passing square, we double the amount. "

"for each passing square we double the amount. "


"And so on. You must be thinking, "

"You must be thinking,"


"Still on the 41th square, "

"Still, on the 41st square, "


"In the year 1959, a year of global transistor output of 60 million transistors was considered extraordinary."

"1959 was an extraordinary year that saw a global output of 60 million transistors."


"Technology helps build better technology. We can see that in the past, civilization was limited to the usage of paper and writing. Calculations done by hand tend to be slow and tedious."

"Technology helps build better technology. In the past civilization was limited to the usage of paper and writing which, when done by hand, tend to be slow and tedious."

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I'm sure there are many many more errors as I only scanned the top part of the article before I got bored.

[bitcoinisbest]

Would the SI create a dystopian or uptoia world

UPTOIA -> Utopia


One that whose can be on behalf of the people -> One who can be on behalf of people


SI Just loves us, treats us like a pet, makes decisions on our behalf that we may or may not like -> SI just love us, treats us like a pet and make decisions on our behalf that we may or may not like it.


It be like a ferry captain sailing -> It is like a ferry captain sailing


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[ZeyadS]

"then move much quicker"
"move" -> "it moves"

"then it moves much quicker"

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[erikalui]

1. Let'us think about the future

^Add the apostrophe


2. Human evolution took tens of thousands of years to adapt to noticeable brain size and architecture changes.

3.Still on the 41st square

4. An understanding of empathy, compassion, placing itself into other's shoes. An understanding of other's perceptions.


5. One can be detached from the emotional side of things and still be giving because that's is the right thing to do, but you'll find that the most prolifically altruistic people get an intense emotional rush by helping people.

Replaced "divorced" by "detached", "it's" by "that's" and "from" by "by"

6. Carefulness of avoiding putting it into the wrong hands and having it learn from the internet public, not everyone has these traits nor concerns themselves, it's best to have it on the side teaching it core human values like positive attributes and having it mature in this way.


The above sentence can be rewritten as "Carefulness to avoid putting it into the wrong hands and have it learn from the internet public, are traits and concerns everyone cannot have and hence, it's best to have it on the side teaching it core human values like positive attributes and having it mature in this way."





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[AceKnight]

It's important to have it in good hands

unempathetic --> unsympathetic

idk about this one but the country first letter should be in capital.

"/...like the north korea leader." --> /...like the north Korean leader.


"/...Would the SI create a dystopian or uptoia world? " -->  utopia

Suggestion.

-- it's there just to serve as a purpose to how it might outthink
-- it's there just to serve as a purpose to how it might outshine

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