Hello, from a fellow gamer and nerd.
I'm fairly new to AltCoins and don't know the specifics about commission, trades, etc.
What I do know, after making YT-Videos for multiple years and being active creating visual content in video form since 2012, is how to make a video appealing.
The video on the frontpage of arenaplay.io was kinda...amateur. I'm guessing there wasn't enough money to make a ~3 minute video, with the most important information.
Another No-Go: Showing off smartphone games in a 16:9 video looks weird. And in context of raising A LOT of money, to have this shown in a video is just plain and simple not inviting.
Also, the logo of "Epic Loot Hunters" is a CLEAR ripoff of the "League of Legends" logo. Not a good sign if you design a logo, so you can trick the audience (most likely of younger demographic) on playing the game, because the "LoL" logo looks similar.
I have watched 5 minutes of the video, but was very turned off by the first 30 seconds. I gave it a chance, but after seeing a self-recorded video, which I think personally isn't appropriate for a video of this type, in addition to a recorded browser window, I really can't support this project.
Thanks,
Daniel
First of all thank you for a such detailed and long review of our campaign. For sure we agree on every point you have mentioned. Please take this seriously.
We would like to have awesome quality from start - spending a big budgets, and Kickstarter like crowdfunding campaigns, but there is few things that is likely not so important on this stage:
1. This is investment campaign, not crowdfunding or advertising, so we propose to our investors to earn money, so watch it as: "A penny saved is a penny earned."
2. Competitors quality and overall background, you can check that we are already added to the few very reputable resources, and it is not something like icobench and other:
- Public voting 4th place from 1000: kickico.com/rating (raised 20M)
- Blockstack Apps -
http://prntscr.com/hkfsig (raised 55M without any Discounts)
3. Regarding Logo, completely agree, we have discussed this already, but agreed that if nobody during those 3 months will not talk about that, we will just doesnt touch it. Yeah it was provocative and specially designed, but not it is looking cheap, so finally we have a point to remake it
And one more thing. You have registered a while ago to specially review our campaign among thousands others, spend your time to get a video and write this text, well it seems that we catch you somehow, or you want to propose us some services or help?
