Flash Grammar Bounty:
My ETH address: 0x28F8eBde32024631972b24e0bCa36dfEF74C6FDe
Mistake: On website:
Need anything clarified?
- Need anything to clarify?
Mistake: on website:
Our token will not change it's type of contract until the full release scheduled in 2019.
- should be its - possessive pronoun
Mistake: on website:
We thrive on being able to provide a opportunity
- should be an opportunity
Mistake: in whitepaper:
This in no way retains to a offering
- should be an offering
Mistake: in whitepaper:
The 21st Century has opened the gates to an ever expanding growth of technology; One of which being cryptocurrencies.
- The first letter of a word should be in lower case when the word is preceded by a semicolon (';')
Mistake: in whitepaper:
Cryptocurrency has began to take on other forms as well
- should be has begun (past participle)
Mistake: in whitepaper:
Encryption and Cryptography in it’s early days was used
- should be its - possessive pronoun
Mistake: in whitepaper:
It’s design was built upon a algorithm developed
- should be its - possessive pronoun
Mistake: in whitepaper:
Every time at transaction or change is submitted
- should be a, not at
Mistake: in whitepaper:
blockchain network to establish a entirely new digital era
- should be an entirely
Mistake: in whitepaper:
transfer this value along with it to it’s designated receiver
- should be its - possessive pronoun
Mistake: in whitepaper:
the ability to scale and grow at a unprecedented rate
- should be an unprecedented
Mistake: in whitepaper:
It still has it’s value
- should be its - possessive pronoun
Mistake: in whitepaper:
This in turn expands
- should be: This, in turn, expands (there should be commas around the interrupter in turn, which interrupts the flow of the sentence)
Mistake: in whitepaper:
revolutionize media development to it’s next age
- should be its - possessive pronoun
Mistake: in whitepaper:
ICO will offer DCBL at it’s lowest price to the public
- should be its - possessive pronoun
Mistake: in whitepaper:
P3. APRIL 10st - MAY 9th = $2.00
- should be 10th
Mistake: in whitepaper:
Deriving from a simple belief that creative expression should not only maintain it’s value, but also grow it’s value
- should be its - possessive pronoun
Mistake: in whitepaper:
allows Bitcoin to run at it’s efficient and constantly progressing speeds
- should be its - possessive pronoun
Mistake: in whitepaper:
Every computer that provides it’s resources towards mining
- should be its - possessive pronoun
Mistake: in whitepaper:
demolishing the overall outcome of entertainment and it’s worth
- should be its - possessive pronoun
Mistake: in whitepaper:
bring value back to creativity and it’s beholders
- should be its - possessive pronoun
Mistake: in whitepaper:
securely to the designated receiver along with it’s inherited value
- should be its - possessive pronoun
