New Proposal - Looking for feedback

[dooglus]

Matter of fact, he found some huge flaws in our business model when we first opened. Possibly because he was the only person paying close attention. And he was a gentleman in warning us about them, leading to some much-needed changes.

Do you know that your signature is showing up as "*Image Removed*" only now?

I don't know if you see it the same as everyone else does.