Third video is now out thanks for the comment please share this to all your social media account
the main site is not yet up if it will not go up I will just use the newsletter squeeze page..
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZPlfbCEVs-8Fourth one will come in a few days .have to do trading now
Are you a native English speaker ?
The reason I ask is because the English in your videos (plural) is not correct.
I would be happy to help with the wording to make it correct as I did in the previous video.
I am happy that someone is making videos but I also don't want it to have a deleterious affect on the coin because of perceived unprofessionalism being misconstrued with improper English usage.
She is a crypto investor actively trading on various crypto exchange.
She is a crypto investor actively trading on various crypto exchange
s. <-- Exchanges should be plural
She made a huge income after investing on this profitable altcoin.
"Income" is an ongoing thing.. thusly we do not say made a huge income.
You would say "IS making" or is in the "process of making"
One does not invest ON an altcoin. One invests IN an altcoin.
The proper sentence would be
"She is making great income after investing in this profitable altcoin."
"She decided to share this profitable crypto currency knowing how profitable and easy to use"
is incorrect English
"She decided to share this profitable crypto currency knowing how profitable and easy to use
it is" <-- is correct
Lastly who is Pablo Lema and why are you hocking his book in this video ?
https://youtu.be/ZPlfbCEVs-8?t=35sthen you link to a blank Wordpress page ?
http://coexistinfo.site/
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