it's good that more people are doing this but... do you want 100% honest feedback?
you know when you go to the cinema and the movie is so corny, so cheesy that you want to sink down in your seat and hide your face in embarrassment?
that's how i felt about the voice in your video and had to switch it off after just a few seconds.
Yes.
Edit: I see the hidden message. I like to be private.