You surely put a lot of effort behind that paper...
You should space your paragraphs a bit, it a bit too bundled for my taste, but other than that, it is looking good.
Saying people should "give away" their coins is a bit far fetched... Nobody will just "give away" money in the hope that it would spark mainstream adoption. There are more than enough coins in circulation for it
to be availlable for everyone.
The marketting of Bitcoin is the biggest challenge, because it's a disruptive technology and it's going up against some of the giants of the financial industry. These giants are not playing by the rules and they are
hiring shills to bad mouth it's competition. So the odds are stacked up against us and we fight with our one hand tied behind our backs.
