First you need to move this thread at the Long-term loans section which can be found here
https://bitcointalk.org/index.php?board=88.0Then, summarize your story it's too long and not appealing, I almost lost interest in reading after 2nd paragraph
Much better if you can just post like this
Loan Amount:Reason for Taking out a Loan:Amount to be repaid:Repayment Date:Type of Collateral:Bitcoin Address:Credits to
zazarb, I took those from his loan thread section
Then indicate open for discussion for the collateral. What you are offering is a physical collateral which means the person who will lend you must hold that land title or certificate.
Goodluck