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[buwaytress]

You shouldn't find any trouble getting responses from here, but I'd recommend you contact the PR agencies directly... You better be prepared to spend some serious bitcoin though, token payments ain't going to cut it.

You might need some serious work on the whitepaper first, however. The introduction's a little shaky, which won't help your project distinguish itself from many other projects purporting to revolutionise the media scene, who've already launched ICOs and are building their products now. If I'm frank, the whitepaper contains very little to suggest it'll do any different, took me a lot of effort to get past the intro even.

[DecibelsICO]

You shouldn't find any trouble getting responses from here, but I'd recommend you contact the PR agencies directly... You better be prepared to spend some serious bitcoin though, token payments ain't going to cut it.

You might need some serious work on the whitepaper first, however. The introduction's a little shaky, which won't help your project distinguish itself from many other projects purporting to revolutionise the media scene, who've already launched ICOs and are building their products now. If I'm frank, the whitepaper contains very little to suggest it'll do any different, took me a lot of effort to get past the intro even.

Your recommendations are EXTREMELY appreciated buwaytress! I thank you for taking a very honest approach to our presentation as it will definitely help us grow. I do see what you mean by the introduction being a bit dry. I was more trying to warm people to the idea who do not know as much about cryptocurrency. My general market is groups of people who know nearly nothing about it. Artists, Musicians, Developers, etc. all are more in tuned with the creative and artistic world more than the technological world. I can see that I should have two separate pitches with one maintaining the technological aspect for my more experienced viewers, and also one like my current white paper, a more subtle aspect meant to introduce those into cryptocurrency.

I will keep your recommendations in mind and will definitely apply them to my short paper/white paper split that I will implement soon.

As far as the PR Agencies, I am in contact with 2 now that are willing to work on a token basis, but my goal isn't just PR for the ICO but also the product itself upon release. This will be a ongoing search and I am just more or less putting a general search out there to gather my resources and connections.

Thanks again for the recommendations my friend!

- Anthony
Chairman and Developer of Decibels Developments

[buwaytress]

Your recommendations are EXTREMELY appreciated buwaytress! I thank you for taking a very honest approach to our presentation as it will definitely help us grow. I do see what you mean by the introduction being a bit dry. I was more trying to warm people to the idea who do not know as much about cryptocurrency. My general market is groups of people who know nearly nothing about it. Artists, Musicians, Developers, etc. all are more in tuned with the creative and artistic world more than the technological world. I can see that I should have two separate pitches with one maintaining the technological aspect for my more experienced viewers, and also one like my current white paper, a more subtle aspect meant to introduce those into cryptocurrency.

I will keep your recommendations in mind and will definitely apply them to my short paper/white paper split that I will implement soon.

As far as the PR Agencies, I am in contact with 2 now that are willing to work on a token basis, but my goal isn't just PR for the ICO but also the product itself upon release. This will be a ongoing search and I am just more or less putting a general search out there to gather my resources and connections.

Thanks again for the recommendations my friend!

- Anthony
Chairman and Developer of Decibels Developments

You're welcome Anthony and I'm glad that you take the points constructively.

Of course, when it comes to white papers, they've evolved to become marketing tools for the business world - quite unlike the early whitepapers of Bitcoin and other blockchain projects. They've basically displaced the marketing brochures that came along with traditional IPOs (since they're used by ICO projects as a venture capital vehicle).

This isn't wrong, merely an accommodation of the mainstream in the industry you're working in - and for you, this is the creative industry. The white paper as an authoritative document outlining the technical aspects and philosophy of a proposal is becoming less common.

What's being attempted now is what you suggest: a splitting of that document. I see a lot of projects now offering a "one-pager" that's completely marketing, summarising your key points. And then a "light paper" that's a bit more creative... then the technical whitepaper. In the end, the main white paper is the only one that is important, but the other "easier reads" will do more to gather your audience.

Best of luck.

[DecibelsICO]

Your recommendations are EXTREMELY appreciated buwaytress! I thank you for taking a very honest approach to our presentation as it will definitely help us grow. I do see what you mean by the introduction being a bit dry. I was more trying to warm people to the idea who do not know as much about cryptocurrency. My general market is groups of people who know nearly nothing about it. Artists, Musicians, Developers, etc. all are more in tuned with the creative and artistic world more than the technological world. I can see that I should have two separate pitches with one maintaining the technological aspect for my more experienced viewers, and also one like my current white paper, a more subtle aspect meant to introduce those into cryptocurrency.

I will keep your recommendations in mind and will definitely apply them to my short paper/white paper split that I will implement soon.

As far as the PR Agencies, I am in contact with 2 now that are willing to work on a token basis, but my goal isn't just PR for the ICO but also the product itself upon release. This will be a ongoing search and I am just more or less putting a general search out there to gather my resources and connections.

Thanks again for the recommendations my friend!

- Anthony
Chairman and Developer of Decibels Developments

You're welcome Anthony and I'm glad that you take the points constructively.

Of course, when it comes to white papers, they've evolved to become marketing tools for the business world - quite unlike the early whitepapers of Bitcoin and other blockchain projects. They've basically displaced the marketing brochures that came along with traditional IPOs (since they're used by ICO projects as a venture capital vehicle).

This isn't wrong, merely an accommodation of the mainstream in the industry you're working in - and for you, this is the creative industry. The white paper as an authoritative document outlining the technical aspects and philosophy of a proposal is becoming less common.

What's being attempted now is what you suggest: a splitting of that document. I see a lot of projects now offering a "one-pager" that's completely marketing, summarising your key points. And then a "light paper" that's a bit more creative... then the technical whitepaper. In the end, the main white paper is the only one that is important, but the other "easier reads" will do more to gather your audience.

Best of luck.

Hello Again!

Your outlook is more than appreciated, taking constructive criticism in a positive way is the only way to progress in the business world. We will definitely take a second approach at this with your words in mind, we have already began more detail into our production, some use cases that will boost interest without releasing our main goal project, and a video production to gain interest from our more visually intrigued members.

Hopefully this will be more along the lines of what you had in mind!

Thanks again for the interest my friend,

- Anthony
Chairman and Developer of Decibels Developments

[DecibelsICO]

Bumping my thread, still seeking some online marketing!