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September 30, 2013, 09:56:54 PM |
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well the 2 things that fail finshaggys plotline are this.
he tries to sell a story line of a bank robbery plan that is so simple, the robbers can get away with it and never get caught, yet:
the plan came from a convict, meaning the convicts plan ultimately failed. and if it was done 'hidden camera' style, finshaggy admits all involved would end up serving along time in jail.
either way, his story has now fallen flat on its face before he even wrote the book on it..
i like finshaggys passion for wanting to do something, but i hate that he relies on his weed hallucinations for inspiration, and then more weed to eventually forget previous projects in a fog of smoke...
PLEASE finshaggy, think up a plan of a project that inspires you, something that motivates you, and something that you have ACTUAL experience to bring to life.. then before brainfarting it on these forums.. plan it out on microsoft word (other word packages available for free also) and get to the nitty gritty details.
please dont use these forums as your draft paper..
atleast get to a point of production/development/planning where all the flaws are filled in and it would interest people to read, and then get involved in. then get it started.
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