I need your opinion and advice

[eternalgloom]

Weird that no-one has even mentioned this, the little bit of text that's on your website is really not written in a professional fashion.
It's clearly written by someone who does not have English as his/her native language.

Just some examples:

On the bottom of the home page:

Start collect cryptoartworks now.

Should be: Start collecting crypto artworks now! - or something similar, I'm not a professional writer myself

and

What’s the big deal?

These Cryptoartworks are not just your cryptopaintings, they are cryptocollectibles. And you can buy, sell, or trade your CryptoArtwork like they do at traditional auctions (but will you? This is your own Van Gogh!), and all the procedures are under the blockchain technology which will track ownership securely.

Just reads a bit weird, especially the "(but will you? This is your own Van Gogh!)" bit.

[artmartiros]

Hi guys!

I created the project a bit like CryptoKitties, only CruptoArtworks, without the ability to reproduce. This is my first experience and I did everything alone.

After I finished, I realized that I do not know how to entice people. And I have a question? Am I doing the right thing that I made this project, or is it not necessary for anyone?

To fully understand what the site is about, here is the link https://cryptoartworks.io

I will be glad to hear any your opinion.

This an interesting project, but I have one question. In your FAQs you say:

CryptoArtworks is the unique way to become an exclusive owner of a masterpiece which is obviously one-of-a-kind and 100% owned by you. No one can replicate it, take it away, or destroy.

Be sure, every masterpiece (exactly like real one) is made in one example. So, you will never find another 'Sunflowers' (if only Van Gogh would decide to paint the sequel, and he probably wouldn't).

What if someone adds a tiny dot of a different color in the corner of a picture? The picture will look absolutely the same but cryptographically it will be another thing entirely and thus it will not be regarded as replication.

How can you guarantee to your customers that something like this will not happen?

Smartcontract saves only the name of pictures and authors name. And there is a test for uniqueness inside smartcontract so i cannot put same artworks. I dont put image inside smartcontract.

[artmartiros]

Weird that no-one has even mentioned this, the little bit of text that's on your website is really not written in a professional fashion.
It's clearly written by someone who does not have English as his/her native language.

Just some examples:

On the bottom of the home page:

Start collect cryptoartworks now.

Should be: Start collecting crypto artworks now! - or something similar, I'm not a professional writer myself

and

What’s the big deal?

These Cryptoartworks are not just your cryptopaintings, they are cryptocollectibles. And you can buy, sell, or trade your CryptoArtwork like they do at traditional auctions (but will you? This is your own Van Gogh!), and all the procedures are under the blockchain technology which will track ownership securely.

Just reads a bit weird, especially the "(but will you? This is your own Van Gogh!)" bit.

Yes indeed i am not native english speaker. i will fix it, thank you for your comment.

[Webark]

Hi

Agreed with whats mentioned above. Try to re word the text and also

Maybe try to come up with a slogan :

Invest in the past and future..  , Monetary history, Invest the past, secure your future.. Something along these lines would be nice. Easy on the mind .
Anyway like your concept...

Also just a thought, include a set of icons on the first page below your text. Midway between the bottom and text.
An icon for
Buying - Selling - Trading

Below each icon a title and perhpas below the title a description of 1 or 2 sentences for example:

Buying - Icon
Buying  - Title
Buy art using crypto currency... - Description


Understand it's early days and your working on it so looking forward to seeing this site a year from now, best wishes

If you need help with icons, designs, etc feel free to let me know i have most of these on hand if it help..

[Betwrong]

Hi guys!

I created the project a bit like CryptoKitties, only CruptoArtworks, without the ability to reproduce. This is my first experience and I did everything alone.

After I finished, I realized that I do not know how to entice people. And I have a question? Am I doing the right thing that I made this project, or is it not necessary for anyone?

To fully understand what the site is about, here is the link https://cryptoartworks.io

I will be glad to hear any your opinion.

This an interesting project, but I have one question. In your FAQs you say:

CryptoArtworks is the unique way to become an exclusive owner of a masterpiece which is obviously one-of-a-kind and 100% owned by you. No one can replicate it, take it away, or destroy.

Be sure, every masterpiece (exactly like real one) is made in one example. So, you will never find another 'Sunflowers' (if only Van Gogh would decide to paint the sequel, and he probably wouldn't).

What if someone adds a tiny dot of a different color in the corner of a picture? The picture will look absolutely the same but cryptographically it will be another thing entirely and thus it will not be regarded as replication.

How can you guarantee to your customers that something like this will not happen?

Smartcontract saves only the name of pictures and authors name. And there is a test for uniqueness inside smartcontract so i cannot put same artworks. I dont put image inside smartcontract.

That's what I'm asking about. Can you elaborate on how that test for uniqueness works? Or, are you saying that it checks only the name of a picture and author's name? That would be ridiculous imo. The thing is that if you create an original and unique crypto artwork you can protect it cryptographically from frauds, but you can't do that if the original work isn't yours for the reasons I've mentioned above.

[yojodojo21]

Hi guys!

I created the project a bit like CryptoKitties, only CruptoArtworks, without the ability to reproduce. This is my first experience and I did everything alone.

After I finished, I realized that I do not know how to entice people. And I have a question? Am I doing the right thing that I made this project, or is it not necessary for anyone?

To fully understand what the site is about, here is the link https://cryptoartworks.io

I will be glad to hear any your opinion.

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[artmartiros]

That's what I'm asking about. Can you elaborate on how that test for uniqueness works? Or, are you saying that it checks only the name of a picture and author's name? That would be ridiculous imo. The thing is that if you create an original and unique crypto artwork you can protect it cryptographically from frauds, but you can't do that if the original work isn't yours for the reasons I've mentioned above.

My English is not very good.
All the artworks in the game made by famous artists such as Da Vinci and Picasso. Only i have the ability to upload artworks. The smartcontract checks, the author's name and the title of the picture character by character, if they already exist, then the program does not create a duplicate. Image is taken from opensource and dont put to the smartcontract

[yamatoo]

Nice. Glad to see you're supporting your community.

[artmartiros]

Nice. Glad to see you're supporting your community.

i will do my best

[charlizesmmes09]

The website seems too simple for me.
About traffice, I think you first do something for free too atract users need your service. You can ask for back link, sharing, likes, etc. to get your project known to people

[Betwrong]

That's what I'm asking about. Can you elaborate on how that test for uniqueness works? Or, are you saying that it checks only the name of a picture and author's name? That would be ridiculous imo. The thing is that if you create an original and unique crypto artwork you can protect it cryptographically from frauds, but you can't do that if the original work isn't yours for the reasons I've mentioned above.

My English is not very good.
All the artworks in the game made by famous artists such as Da Vinci and Picasso. Only i have the ability to upload artworks. The smartcontract checks, the author's name and the title of the picture character by character, if they already exist, then the program does not create a duplicate. Image is taken from opensource and dont put to the smartcontract

Thanks for your explanation. Now I see what was meant. The cryptoartworks, paintings by famous artists such as Da Vinci and Van Gogh, will be unique only inside your network, and only there you can guarantee that there will be no duplicates. It is not like CryptoKitties then and your statement in the OP:

~
I created the project a bit like CryptoKitties, only CruptoArtworks, without the ability to reproduce. ~

is a bit misleading because not only your CryptoArtworks lack the ability to reproduce, they also lack the ability to be unique all over the Internet. You see, in CryptoKitties each cat is one-of-a-kind and it cannot be replicated anywhere, while your CryptoArtworks cannot be replicated only inside your network.

[artmartiros]

is a bit misleading because not only your CryptoArtworks lack the ability to reproduce, they also lack the ability to be unique all over the Internet. You see, in CryptoKitties each cat is one-of-a-kind and it cannot be replicated anywhere, while your CryptoArtworks cannot be replicated only inside your network.

I will change description on website to prevent misundestanding

[Betwrong]

is a bit misleading because not only your CryptoArtworks lack the ability to reproduce, they also lack the ability to be unique all over the Internet. You see, in CryptoKitties each cat is one-of-a-kind and it cannot be replicated anywhere, while your CryptoArtworks cannot be replicated only inside your network.

I will change description on website to prevent misundestanding

That would be great, because if you want your business to be successful in the future you have to be open and honest with your potential customers. I sincerely wish you good luck with this project or another one. Just keep trying creating something new and original and be honest with yourself and with others while discussing your new project. All the best!

[artmartiros]

That would be great, because if you want your business to be successful in the future you have to be open and honest with your potential customers. I sincerely wish you good luck with this project or another one. Just keep trying creating something new and original and be honest with yourself and with others while discussing your new project. All the best!

Thanks bro

[sharif116]

You have done really a good job in here as a new comer.so don't give up and try to promote this and you will be success.

[wudackprod]

Very interesting idea, but I didn't like your site design. You had to take responsibility for the development of the site, the presentation of your team

[artmartiros]

Very interesting idea, but I didn't like your site design. You had to take responsibility for the development of the site, the presentation of your team

Maybe it's better to attract more traffic now? And after that already improve the site?

[artmartiros]

Very interesting idea, but I didn't like your site design. You had to take responsibility for the development of the site, the presentation of your team

I agree with you that i should improve site quality

[Joker007]

Interesting idea. I would develop the landing page, add more visuals to it. As mentioned above, improve the language.
To promote your project you should know your target audience to choose the right platform and way of promoting.

[artmartiros]

Interesting idea. I would develop the landing page, add more visuals to it. As mentioned above, improve the language.
To promote your project you should know your target audience to choose the right platform and way of promoting.

Could you say in what place problem with language& And i improve it