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January 02, 2014, 12:48:12 AM |
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Looks pretty good but I have some suggestions.
You need to have it proofread because I see a lot of grammar errors and that might be a concern for some who want to make sure they are dealing with a legitimate operation. Perhaps you can offer some bitcoins to someone to proofread and give you revised script to use.
Some of the colors of text are hard on the eyes. For example, the INVEST page uses a green or yellow (I'm color-blind) for some phrases like "How to Purchase shares", also improper use of caps in that statement, see my first suggestion. The colors hurt my eyes, but you might want some more opinions on that first before trusting a dichromat.
Why not post a picture of your business location or office on the contact page? Are you in an actual office there or a "virtual" one because it looks like the real estate owner offers virtual office space out of that location.
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