Review of whitepaper

[bst-conf]

I'm working at company who's making new ICO, and we all know how important it is to prepare good whitepaper. We are still working hard to master it, which leads me to my question.

Is there anybody who could read and review our whitepaper? We want to make it as transparent as possible, so we figured out that external review would help us a lot 

We may offer our tokens as gratitude for help when our ICO (hopefully!) is out. Thank you in advance for all help

[allahabadi]

I works suggest you to put out a ver. 0.0.1 in the crypto domain for various experts to evaluate and give their opinions on. You can then tweak it as you go along, alot of ICOs do that.