This seems to be a free review for most of the ICO experts but if there are people interested doing this, you may want to get a free consultation on the Project Development section or Service Announcement (Altcoins).
Most of the ICO reviewers can be found there.
Hello jossiel! Thank you for your guidance on this forum. I will post this request on the Service Announcement board to find volunteers who would like to look at our whitepaper.
I would like to mention that it is written from ground up and we have been receiving positive feedbacks from people who have read it.
Also, I would like to tell you that we just got A1 rating from one of the best ICO project analysers which puts us in the Top 3 Upcoming ICO projects.
Good luck with that. It's good to see that you are making it better through asking the community on what they think about your whitepaper. Not like those projects that are used to copy paste others work, you are doing a good job with this kind of initiative.
I'm not very much familiar with any of those ICO project analysers but if you got it base on the effort you made with that project, meaning to say that you are doing good. I wish you all the best with that project you are working with.