You might want to flesh it out a little bit before posting. Its not like someone is going to steal your idea as NFT game platforms are being proposed left and right and have actual proof of concepts already.
Also not sure I would call that a whitepaper but rather just your website? The whitepaper will focus on the problem you are solving and your solution and should be included along with your roadmap and dev team type of stuff.
Also 'altcoin' is not really inappropriate for a metaverse pirate game...
Yeah, that is the biggest obstacle we will face, but I do believe that it can have some traction because now-large altcoins like Catgirl had no proof of concept, and is being build solely of of Marketing and Developing earnings from their accounts.
So we went with altcoin, because the ticker $alt, is salt, and we are naming our game The $altyverse, I do agree it can be a bit confusing for those outside, but we thought it was pretty good. If you all disagree, my team and I can definitely go back to the drawing board.
As for the whitepaper, I will definitely look around at other whitepapers, we had something similar to the other altcoins, but I will take a closer look at the larger altcoins and see what they have going on!
Thank you for the critique!