Our token will be used on many ecommerce platforms that are already on the Internet & you will get huge discounts & offers when we shop using COFT.
Can you provide guarantees about this to be true? I don't think it's that easy to make such a giant step.
The presentation looks so poor, so i would like to suggest you few options that may help you:
Buy a copper membership, create a nice presentation of your project, then publish it in the Altcoins announcements board.
Or hire someone to do this as you are a newbie and your activities are so limited and won't help you react over things here.