I think you have a good whitepaper explaining what you want to achieve very well. There are a few aspects I would like to highlight if you can please explain those:
- If the private data (private keys) will be stored local, what would happen if a player's hard drive crashes? Will you provide an online backup facility or is it for the player to make his or her own backups?
- The whitepaper explains the mechanics well relating to gun stats etc. and RNG playing a role in being successful in a hunt. However, in hunting, accurate shot placement is part of the skill and thrill. Will a player be able to aim for a head shot or will the player just aim in general towards the animal and if successful it will register a kill and not indicate the result of the shot placement?
- How much do you foresee the cost be to play per week in terms of transaction fees?
- The NFT animal list page in the whitepaper is not displaying properly (perhaps it is just on my side)
- In the market overview section - Hunting/gaming market under "Hunting games" you refer to 150,000 million players. You are probably referring to 150 million players.
- Consider doxxing the team and not just abstract names.
- Consider having an audit done and publishing the results