To be honest I copied the terms of service from another exchange, because you don't need to reinvent the wheel ... the terms of service were good enough. I have changed it right now. Actually if a law in Pakistan texthenIndias then Indias laws will apply.
Yes, it's a common practice for small online businesses to copy T&C from similar websites, but you would expect more serious approach from the first exchange in Pakistan, or at least to get a proof read. If you're supposed to be dealing with large amounts of money/btc, you need to get everything right.
I'm completely unfamiliar with regulations in Pakistan, but I know they do have their equivalent of KYC/AML. Are you absolutely sure that running such exchange is in full compliance with the law? Did you seek for a legal advice before launching?
I don't want to read one day that Pakistani authorities shut down your business, got you arrested and seized X amount of BTC etc. It's important to do your homework beforehand.
What security measures have you taken in storing BTC?
Also, all the referral links in your sig doesn't add to your credibility. No offense, but it looks like you prefer to earn a few scraps of BTC, rather than promote your own business.
And if this is the official thread, then it looks rather poor. You didn't even put your logo?
You don't quite make an impression of trustworthy business imho, but hope you'll get everything sorted. A solid, legit exchange in Pakistan would be a great thing for the bitcoin as a whole.