I am in the process of writing my second draft for RDD to be included in my book. Here is the first draft:
http://tinypic.com/r/s2wknm/8
I know that the logo needs changing (the red token part is cut off). Is there anything else important I have missed?
I am considering increasing each coin section to 4 pages. This would then make it possible to detail how many coins have been and will be generated over time (tabular form on the first page.
Bitcointalk.org thread is:
https://bitcointalk.org/index.php?topic=483187.180