Bitcoin, and the production of freedom in financial markets

[Torgbuiagorkoli]

Hey All!
I am writing a thesis on financial markets and the production of freedom, using bitcoin as my main case study.  It is incomplete, but I am looking for feedback on what I have so far.  Please give any feedback you can (dont be nice )

Thanks!  You can find it at this link: https://docs.google.com/a/ucsc.edu/document/d/1JIyMWIibqH8x20vGBTMBZ2yqM7Xbp54UpWBh0o2H7WI/edit

[Murphant]

I'd be interested in reading it, is the google docs version the latest? Do you have a PDF version?

[knight22]

Reading it actually. Seems pretty neutral and accurate from now on.

[Jutarul]

Don't know the scientific level of the degree you're pursuing, but phrases like "bringing us" is non-scientific writing style. It's more creative writing.

When I got more time I'll make more qualified comments though