Correct your spelling mistakes, use chrome and it should highlight them for you.
I gave merit for this.
Good post but try to go back and edit your post to be as readable as possible. The more digestable and readable you make a post, the more people will bother to stop and read not just skim and possibly give you merit for a point well made.
Just space out the sentences a little bit, a problem with online is that even a normal set of sentences can turn into a wall of text that is unwelcoming in a whole thread. Double space on a new sentence also, small things add up
This is advice I was given similarly when trying to pass my English writing coursework and so on, I have some teachers for relatives but normally English, comprehension etc is my worst subject so I have to be careful. I'm happy to give merit for anyone who put a bit of effort into their post and also says some worth reading.
Thanks for giving a merit to my post and an advice. This will help me a lot and yeah you are right I think that its better to make a double space in every new sentence.
Thanks too to vlom who gave merit in my post. I appreciate it. Hope you can give more merit to some deserving posts
I will edit it to make it more neat
