Paying Someone with resonable qualifications Ethical Design Paper

[onemd]

Provided you have reasonable qualifications, and your work is outstanding, I am willing to pay 0.1 BTC, in a bit of a time hurdle, and this needs to be done fairly quickly but good quality.

Google Doc: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_PX2R6FNj7BPzLZGJmoL35qV4mc0QFxvpWWLIrrIxzw/edit (Paper Submission)
Google Doc(2): https://docs.google.com/document/d/1yl5CrSAlUXAcphUIZ8OpAELf3DeuljL7g2N__EcGWKU/edit?usp=sharing (Paper Submission)
Paper: http://standards.ieee.org/develop/indconn/ec/ead_v1.pdf

Rules: "Submissions should include the name of the individual submitting, the organization they represent, and the page number(s) of Ethically Aligned Design being referenced. When submitting potential issues or Candidate Recommendations, background research or resources
supporting comments should also be included. Please ensure submissions provide actionable critique (e.g., “On page X, I recommend adding the following resource”) versus opinion without clear recommendations, (e.g., “I didn’t like the Issue on page X.”)"

Message from CEO: "It would be helpful if we are to post this to have you mention why you're sending this in regards to our paper, Ethically Aligned Design to avoid confusion as the Request for Input was specifically designed for that purpose.
Again, it's a great paper, but we just need to know how you feel it relates to our paper so we aren't just posting a really smart and informed article."

The CEO did comment on the paper being outstanding in quality, however I forgot to "Ethically Aligned Design - Request for Input", to reference page numbers, and areas that would be applicable to the contents of the google doc. Anyone willing to read over the doc,
and the paper above, and to write up a paper on where the content would make sense and what to reference?

I believe these two below, being 1# as most applicable, if you find any other areas applicable let me know.

#1) Safety and Beneficence of Artificial General Intelligence (AGI) and Artificial Superintelligence (ASI) 49-55
#2) Embedding Values into Autonomous Intelligent Systems 22-35

Concepts:

Altruism over psychopathy
Altruism connected to Empathy (2nd Paper)
Empathy over efficiency

[buwaytress]

As in PM, I've accepted and completed the job. You should receive the documents with track changes (PM me if you need them in another format) and comments. In general:

1. Minor rewrites and edits. Some sections seem heavily borrowed from literature and not much rewriting necessary (though I have tried to make the language uniform). Due to your time constraints, I won't be able complete a rewrite so quickly anyway.
2. Added additional citations, included missing ones and corrected existing ones (e.g. for APA, the title of the article is italicised, not the publication).
3. In response to the feedback you received, I've made specific references to the EAD and supplemented with a few points of argument. Feel free to accept/reject.
4. Suggested sectioning your main paper.
5. Highly recommend you incorporate the one-pager into the main doc under Sec. 3.

I hope you're satisfied with my work. I left you contact details in PM.

[Lontongmie]

As in PM, I've accepted and completed the job. You should receive the documents with track changes (PM me if you need them in another format) and comments. In general:

1. Minor rewrites and edits. Some sections seem heavily borrowed from literature and not much rewriting necessary (though I have tried to make the language uniform). Due to your time constraints, I won't be able complete a rewrite so quickly anyway.
2. Added additional citations, included missing ones and corrected existing ones (e.g. for APA, the title of the article is italicised, not the publication).
3. In response to the feedback you received, I've made specific references to the EAD and supplemented with a few points of argument. Feel free to accept/reject.
4. Suggested sectioning your main paper.
5. Highly recommend you incorporate the one-pager into the main doc under Sec. 3.

I hope you're satisfied with my work. I left you contact details in PM.

That doesn't make sense! The op hired me for this task!?

[Lontongmie]

Proof that the OP hired me for this task

So I'm hired?

Yes your hired, start as soon as you can.

Regards
onemd

OP, please clarify what is going on. I spent a lot of time reading the 100 page paper that you sent me, and am halfway done with the work you sent me.

[onemd]

Proof that the OP hired me for this task

So I'm hired?

Yes your hired, start as soon as you can.

Regards
onemd

OP, please clarify what is going on. I spent a lot of time reading the 100 page paper that you sent me, and am halfway done with the work you sent me.

I've hired two different people to have two separate perceptions, You'll both be eligible for payments of 0.1 BTC each.

[Lontongmie]

I have also finished. I had a slightly different take than the other person you hired.

I like the idea of two separate documents, but can incorporate it into one big one if you want. Subsections were necessary as the writing was hard to follow.
Did not change much because the CEO loved it. I still spent time on it, but made minor edits. Completely rewriting the pages did not make sense because the CEO clearly said he loved it. Simply edited and rewrote parts that did not sound professional, and recommended changes to EAD along with why based on the writing, as the CEO had asked you to relate the pages back to EAD

[Lontongmie]

The OP has both pieces of work. Hopefully he can pay us both put soon
Good luck with your AI piece!