If you think that we, as investors, are going to be impressed by your inability to create a decent announcement, where you don't even realize that you have 5 copies of the same fucking thing on the one page, think again.
Same goes for my confidence in your ability to run a hotel chain. Jog on!!
You have a point on this. Running a hotel chain is not an easy feat.
So at least the OP should give us a good impression that he can handle such kind of business.
Anyway, he's asking for feedback. So my opinion is try harder next time.