crypto tokens

[HotelChain]

This concept combines the comfort of the hotel and working atmosphere of business community and takes into account enquiries and interests of proactive people: co-working space, conference rooms and coffee zones.

[NewWorldCoiner]

If you think that we, as investors, are going to be impressed by your inability to create a decent announcement, where you don't even realize that you have 5 copies of the same fucking thing on the one page, think again.

Same goes for my confidence in your ability to run a hotel chain. Jog on!!

[cryptocronic]

What country are you starting this in and who will be building these hotelchain hotels?  Have you thought this idea through at all?

[TimeTeller]

If you think that we, as investors, are going to be impressed by your inability to create a decent announcement, where you don't even realize that you have 5 copies of the same fucking thing on the one page, think again.

Same goes for my confidence in your ability to run a hotel chain. Jog on!!

You have a point on this. Running a hotel chain is not an easy feat.
So at least the OP should give us a good impression that he can handle such kind of business.
Anyway, he's asking for feedback. So my opinion is try harder next time.