I would like to start out by saying that I believe this game is going to go viral and will be a huge player in the crypto-currency world. (Now here comes the but
) I really think you need to have someone, with English as their first language, helping you with spelling and grammar. On your homepage you have this:
Introduce
Let us return to nature, with millions of players around the world experience pure and fresh and vibrant farm life!!!! Start with simple work, animal feed, planting fruit trees, and build cake oven and ice cream machine and other facilities, will be the most delicious food is made of fresh produce, eventually you will be able to expand your farm and decoration into the most beautiful and her dream manor. Through the trade with your friends as well as global players, you will become the famous farm tycoon......
I can understand this just fine, but it isn't written in proper English. I'm not an spelling and grammar snob, who gets off on pointing out people's mistakes to make them look bad. I simply want to help you be as professional as possible. There are people out there, who wouldn't even give your game a second look if they saw a poorly written homepage. Maybe you'd say 'well we don't need those people anyways'. But I'd say "why not include them?"
without changing the content of your paragraph It should be written more like this.
Introduction
Let's return to nature, with millions of players from around the world, experiencing pure, fresh and vibrant farm life!!!! Start with simple work feeding animals, planting fruit trees, building cake ovens, ice cream machines and other facilities. It will be the most delicious food, made from fresh produce. Eventually, you will be able to expand your farm and decorate it into the most beautiful dream manor. Through trade with your friends, as well as global players, you will become a famous farm tycoon......
I'm sure my high school English teacher would have her red pen out and correct me a bit too, but you get the idea. Professionalism should be very high on your list of priorities with a project of this scale.
Sorry if I offended you, it was not my intention. I wish you continued success.
