The fact that the transcript is punctuated with "yeah", "um", and "like", and expresses the need to point out he "mispelled" (sic) my name in a Google search doesn't reflect well on the transcriber. If he is allegedly an idiot, it would have to be because of the message, and not because he says "um" a lot. I haven't read the transcript all the way through, but am bothered by the fact that I am seemingly being asked him to judge him on his ability to articulate sentences in public, something that isn't a prerequisite for being who he is.
I can overlook the ums, yeahs, and likes. I do it all the time, so do most people without really good public speaking skills.
However what is painful is things like:
1) using the word "we". "we are not a flashy startup". He can't speak for Bitcoin. It would be like someone giving a presentation on the internet and using "we" as if they own, control, and operate the internet.
2) "I think". As in "I think the banks will fail". Irrelivent. If the person in the audience disagrees with that statement they have just been tuned out.
3) Blantantly false or exagurated claims. "apparently I can buy almost anything in Finland". What is worse is the word apparently is a weasel word. It leads the audience to doubt the claim almost as soon as it is said. In this case they would be right. Someone midly interested does their own research finds out it is false and then they dismiss the entire presentation. Its bad. In presenting unless you know a statement, claim, or fact is 100% guaranteed accurate don't say it.
4) Insisting there are no fees. Hey Taaki what are these
http://blockchain.info/charts/transaction-fees? Also hint hint the subsidy is a form of hidden fee. When 1% more coins are minted all existing coins have their value reduced by 1%. Granted the demand is growing faster than the minting rate and thus price rises but Bitcoin HAS FEES. Honestly the claim "no fees" is not only wrong it is counterproductive. First it makes Bitcoin seem even more implausible. If there are no fees then who/what pays for the network? Is it a bunch of socialists who believe in "the common good" and expend energy, labor, and capital to give a superior product for free. Saying "no fees" is just stupid. THERE ARE FEES. Say "lower fees than any other payment processing system", "very small fees", "some transactions may pay a small fee, we are talking less than a penny folks, and many transactions are free".
5) Not answering the question asked. Not sure what was going on here but surprisingly the audience had some good questions. Questions completely ignored in some cases. If you don't know say ... I don't know. Simply talking about something else as an answer makes it seem like there is something to hide.
For the record I am not saying I am an amazing public speaker but anyone representing Bitcoin at a confrence, presentation, or in the media please
1) Leave your rhetoric at home
2) Get your facts rights
3) If it is a planned event write down your talking points and have the community critique them BEFORE you come off as an ass.
4) If you really want to help Bitcoin (and not just your own ego) take a public speaking class
5) (and this is something I do personally for meetings) try to anticipate the likely questions and have answers. It will help you stay on script and seem more knowledgeable.
6) PLEASE be sure to emphasis Bitcoin is an open source project. Be sure the audience understands that you are just one person working on (bitcoin related ventures, improving source code, doing academic research, launching a startup, etc). If will help to perform damage control if you total FAIL HARD. "Well that guy was a flake but Bitcoin does sound interesting".