Hey @Indohunter, enjoy the merit! I remember you! You deserve it, as you've shown that you are wiling to put in the time and effort in order to improve your skills. That's a whole lot better than 95% of the third world posters that I encounter on the forums, and it's great to see that you're showing such a great desire to learn.
I hope you don't mind, but I'm going to take your statement and break it down for you line by line to show you what I consider to be proper English:
I wanted to tell you about my children and wife, and how we spent our weekend. But it's impossible. Why? because i'm not married yet.
I wanted to tell you about my wife and children and how we spent our weekend, but it's impossible. Why? Because I'm not married yet.
Normally, I spend my weekend by doing something fun. Like playing music with my friends. When i was 16, me and my friends on my school build a group band, we named it LAKEPRI BAND, but we fail to keep it. Music already ingrained on me.
Normally, I spend my weekend doing something fun, like playing music with my friends. When I was 16, my school friends and I formed a band called
LAKEPRI BAND, but unfortunately, it didn't last.
But the important thing that i'm doing on the weekend is walking around and finding a mate. hehe
hey, surely. it's an important thing that i need since my age are getting older and still single. In Indonesia when you were above 25 ya and still not get married, people around you will ask "when did you get married?" it's horror, man.
Currently, what I do most on the weekend is walk around in search for a partner. I find this to be very important, because as a 25-year old single male, it's common to hear the question "When are you going to get married?" in Indonesia. It's horrible to continue to get older without finding a partner.
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Maybe someone else can take over the second part. I just wanted you to have a reference to see how someone that speaks English as a first language (me) would have posted what you did.
Keep up the great work, and feel free to ask questions; we're here for you as long as we know you're trying