COOL! time for a global promotion!
oh btw, spelling mistake at the ending --> its "receive". not "recive". quick fix it
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Noted! thanks, Getting that changed.
Just to round up all the changes so that it will be easier.
'IMPROVEMENT's are those that really needs to be changed.
'SUGGESTION's are those that i am simply just suggesting. Purely optional as my English isn't Perfect...didn't scored As in schools for it.
At 0:13ORIGINAL: "...recieve..."
IMPROVEMENT: "...
receive..."
REASON: Spelling mistake
At 0:27ORIGINAL: "People from all industries, walks of life and skillsets" and "can benefit from what Digibyte offers."
SUGGESTION: "People from all industries,
skillsets and
walks of life" and "can benefit from what Digibyte
has to offer."
REASON: based on my English Knowledge, i just thought it sounds better and more fluid sentence-structure wise. that's all.
At 0:48ORIGINAL: "People all over the world are beginning to see & utilize the potential digital money offers." and "Don't let this new wave of technology pass you by."
SUGGESTION: "People all over the world are beginning to see & utilize the potential
that digital money
has to offer." and "Don't let this new wave of technology pass
by you."
REASON: same as 0:27.
At 0:57ORIGINAL: "...recive..."
IMPROVEMENT: "...
receive..."
REASON: Spelling mistake
In addition, i am not sure if its for the best but is it better to remove all the "."? i am referring to the fullstops. As i watched the video, some had it and some didn't. it does look better...visually without them. But i am not sure if its a sensible/logical thing to do. haha...
just to round up other people's posts for your convenience
Thanks for your effort and work. Good Job!
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Great work, thanks.
I think, the language can be formalized a bit more, especially, at: 0.35 secs, like "you can either purchase DGB from exchanges or mine.... etc..", in general, language can be improved in a more formal way. This is really important, implying that how serious DGB is and can take the attention of serious investors.
Also again at at: 0.35 secs, since we give mining information, in the next frame, explain how to mine and mention the security of DGB with that 5 mining algorithms, for example, each algorithm can be circularized around DGB logo.
And I agree that music is a bit disturbing, it could have been better.
Thank you. Regards,
Indeed, and at 0:13 it's written as "recieve" instead of "receive"